Initiations (Star Trek: Voyager)

"Initiations"
Star Trek: Voyager episode
Episode no. Season 2
Episode 2
Directed by Winrich Kolbe
Written by Kenneth Biller
Produced by Wendy Neuss
Merri Howard[1]
Featured music Dennis McCarthy[2]
Cinematography by Marvin V. Rush[1]
Editing by Tom Benko[1]
Production code 121[3]
Original air date September 4, 1995
Running time 45:54[1]
Guest actors

"Initiations" is the second episode of the second season, and eighteenth episode overall of the American science fiction television program Star Trek: Voyager. The episode originally aired on September 4, 1995, and tells the story of Commander Chakotay's capture at the hands of a young Kazon. Originally intended to open the second season, "Initiations" was bumped to second by "The 37's".[4]

To better utilize the character, this is one of several second-season episodes that focuses on Chakotay. It was written with a mind to recall the action story of Chakotay from the pilot. Writer Kenneth Biller extensively rewrote the episode after input from series co-creators Jeri Taylor and Michael Piller; whereas the Kazon originally came across as too much like the Klingons, Biller's research helped emphasize their more street-gang nature. This substantial rewrite of the episode required an overhaul of production work already invested in the episode.

Aron Eisenberg guest starred as Kar, the young Kazon warrior. Though his performance was lauded, he was deemed too recognizable from his recurring role on Star Trek: Deep Space Nine and was a regret of the executive producers. Mixed reviews noted the familiarity of both Eisenberg and the shooting location of Vasquez Rocks.

Plot

On stardate 49005.3,[3] to commemorate the anniversary of his father's death, Commander Chakotay takes a shuttlecraft to perform the pakra ceremony. Inadvertently straying into Kazon-Ogla space, he is attacked by a young Kazon (Aron Eisenberg as Kar) on his first mission. Destroying the Kazon's vessel, Chakotay beams the young Kar aboard.

Captured by a Kazon vessel soon thereafter, Chakotay learns from Kar that Kazon earn their titles through conquest or death, and he has robbed Kar of that opportunity by saving him. The vessel's commander Razik (Patrick Kilpatrick) speaks with Chakotay, explaining his disservice to Kar and that the young Kazon is scheduled for execution. When later presented with a weapon to kill Kar as a lesson to other Kazon youth, Chakotay instead holds Razik hostage in exchange for his shuttle. Kar, seeing no future or opportunities with the Ogla, flees with Chakotay. Unable to elude the Kazon, Chakotay beams himself and Kar to a nearby Class-M moon, a Kazon training ground. Kar, having eschewed an opportunity to kill Chakotay in his sleep, later explains how he has no options open to him and admits that Chakotay may be his only friend now.

Meanwhile, having tracked the shuttle's probable course, Captain Janeway (Kate Mulgrew), Lieutenant Tuvok (Tim Russ), and Kes (Jennifer Lien) proceed to the moon's surface to rescue Chakotay. On the moon, they meet up with Razik and his men who offer to lead the away team to Chakotay. When Chakotay and Kar detect their approach, Chakotay offers to help Kar earn his name by becoming his prisoner. Coordinating with Voyager to prepare for resuscitation, Chakotay allows Kar to shoot him; Kar instead shoots Razik, earning his Ogla name and promoting his second-in-command, Haliz (Tim de Zarn). The Ogla allow the Voyager crew to leave, with Kar's promise that he will kill Chakotay if they meet again. Later, when performing his pakra ceremony aboard Voyager, Chakotay adds Kar to his prayers.

Writing

Kenneth Biller (2009)

"Initiations" is Kenneth Biller's first solo writing credit on Star Trek: Voyager; he summarized the episode as "the Kazon put a hit out on Chakotay".[5] The Chakotay-focused episode was meant to correct what co-creator and executive producer Jeri Taylor felt was an underutilization of the character in the first season.[6] Biller felt the character needed more action stories as shown in the pilot, and wrote "Initiations" to address that.[5] Producer Winrich Kolbe did not care for the aspects of Chakotay's character that the episode played up; where the episode focused on his Native American heritage, Kolbe felt it should have emphasized his Maquis aspects.[7]

Executive producer Michael Piller was displeased with the depiction of the Kazon in Biller's first draft of the episode; where they were supposed to be analogous to street gangs in Los Angeles, they were instead "coming across as warmed-over Klingons." In addition to Jari Taylor's already extensive notes on the draft, Piller suggested Biller get in touch with actual gang members or a police officer who could better clue the writer into street gang culture for the episode. Instead, Biller picked up a copy of Monsta, a book by convicted murderer and former gang member "Monsta" Cody. The book's insight into gang life and culture was a guiding light for Biller's second draft, which he worked up with Piller, endeavoring to set the Kazon apart "from Romulans, Cardassians, and Klingons."[8]

The final draft of the episode was submitted on July 10, 1995.[9]

Casting

Aron Eisenberg (1998)

Playing a recurring character on sister series Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, guest star Aron Eisenberg (Kar) quelled rumors that he was given the part simply because of his Star Trek heritage. He emphasized that he read for the part like any other actor, and felt that he was chosen because the Voyager crew could not find a child actor who could meet muster, nor an adult actor who looked young enough for the part. In an interview with Star Trek: The Official Monthly Magazine, Eisenberg felt that he worked very hard on the episode, and that his musculature was a boon to playing "a warrior kid." Fellow DS9 actor Max Grodénchik was his acting coach for "Initiations".[3][10] On Kar, Eisenberg played the character on the other end of the spectrum from his Nog character, so much so that he wasn't worried about any of Nog's characterizations or idiosyncrasies showing through.[3]

Eisenberg fondly recalled working on "Initiations" both because of his familiarity with much of the crew who had previously worked on Deep Space Nine, as well as the opportunity to "goof around" with Robert Beltran (Chakotay) on set. He would later say to Cinefantastique that he "had a blast" working on the episode, especially the opportunity to play someone "really trying to kill someone."[11] Beltran would later compare the fun they had on set as akin to working with Don Rickles and that Eisenberg was "very quick-witted and not afraid to cut you down."[12]

Co-creator and executive producer Michael Piller called the casting of Eisenberg a "big mistake". Because Eisenberg also played the recurring Ferengi character Nog on Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, and though he was under heavy prosthetics, his voice was too recognizable to fans of both shows. Piller praised his performance, but felt it was a casting mistake to crossover the actor in both shows.[3] Fellow co-creator and executive producer Jeri Taylor echoed Piller's sentiments saying that though Eisenberg was the best actor that auditioned for the part, he was too recognizable as Nog and distracted the viewers.[13] As for Eisenberg himself, he dismissed the people on the Internet saying he was too recognizable saying, "'Come on people, it's the same person.' I was really proud of it."[3]

Production

Biller and Piller's dramatic second draft changes required changes in the episode's sets and shooting schedule, what Piller described as "[having] to change the whole thing overnight." The chaos of the changes prompted a meeting with Piller and the production staff where he defended the upheaval as response to improving the script and overall episode.[8]

In Robert Beltran's portrayal of Chakotay in the episode, the actor bucked what he felt was viewers' expectations. Instead of playing a "mad" Chakotay, he toned it down and made it more of about trying (and failing) to change Kar through kindness and tenderness.[14]

Reception

Cinefantastique‍ '​s Dale Kutzera gave the episode 2.5 out of 4 stars in his review, saying that the episode failed to define the Kazon as an enemy. Kutzera's suspension of disbelief was rocked by the casting of Aron Eisenberg (who Kutzera felt was too synonymous with his Star Trek: Deep Space Nine character, Nog), and the reuse of the immediately-identifiable Vasquez Rocks shooting location.[3] In his book Delta Quadrant: The unofficial guide to Voyager, David McIntee also lamented Eisenberg's recognizability from his other Star Trek series. For the episode itself, McIntee felt the first half has some interesting potential in the culture clashes presented, but that it fell too hard on the of "enemies-must-team-up-to-survive" cliché; he gave the episode a 7 out of 10, calling it "watchable, and occasionally quite strong."[2]

Robert Beltran (Chakotay) said that "Initiations" "summed up in one episode basically what Chakotay is about as a person,"[12] and that it was one of three Chakotay-centric episodes (including "Tattoo" and "Maneuvers") he really enjoyed.[11] Jeri Taylor called the episode "reasonably successful."[13]

References

  1. ↑ 1.0 1.1 1.2 1.3 1.4 "Initiations". Star Trek: Voyager. Season 2. Episode 2. 1995-09-04. UPN.
  2. ↑ 2.0 2.1 McIntee, David (2000). "Second Season". Delta Quadrant: The unofficial guide to Voyager. London, UK: Virgin Publishing Ltd. pp. 67–69. ISBN 0-7535-0436-7.
  3. ↑ 3.0 3.1 3.2 3.3 3.4 3.5 3.6 Kutzera, Dale (November 1996). "Voyager Episode Guide". Cinefantastique (Forest Park, Illinois, USA) 28 (4/5): 77–78. ISSN 0145-6032. Initiations
  4. ↑ Dillard, J. M.; Sackett, Susan (1996). Star Trek: Where No One Has Gone Before. Pocket Books. p. 217. ISBN 978-0-671-00206-0.
  5. ↑ 5.0 5.1 Nemecek, Larry (August 1995). "Ken Biller: Executive Story Editor". The Official Star Trek: Voyager Magazine (New York, New York, USA: Starlog Group, Inc.) (3): 50–52. ISSN 1079-3658.
  6. ↑ "Fine Tuning in Store for New Season". Star Trek: The Official Monthly Magazine (London, England: Titan Books Limited) 1 (6): 10–11. August 1995. ISSN 1357-3888.
  7. ↑ Spelling, Ian (February 1998). "Winrich Kolbe". The Official Star Trek: Voyager Magazine (New York, New York, USA: Starlog Group, Inc.) (15): 12. ISSN 1079-3658.
  8. ↑ 8.0 8.1 Kutzera, Dale (November 1996). "Delta Quadrant Shakedown Cruise: Star Trek Voyager". Cinefantastique (Forest Park, Illinois, USA) 28 (4/5): 76–77. ISSN 0145-6032. Michael Piller gave the writing staff a much needed shake-up during second season.
  9. ↑ "Taylor, J. Mss.". Indiana University. Retrieved 2014-01-05.
  10. ↑ "I Was a Teenage Ferengi". Star Trek: The Official Monthly Magazine (London, England: Titan Books Limited) 1 (14): 57. April 1996. ISSN 1357-3888.
  11. ↑ 11.0 11.1 Kaplan, Anna L. (November 1996). "Nog, Space Cadet". Cinefantastique (Forest Park, Illinois, USA) 28 (4/5): 68–70. ISSN 0145-6032. Aron Eisenberg enjoys taking his character where no Ferengi has gone before, the Starfleet Academy
  12. ↑ 12.0 12.1 Spelling, Ian (June 1996). "Winrich Kolbe". The Official Star Trek: Voyager Magazine (New York, New York, USA: Starlog Group, Inc.) (7): 17. ISSN 1079-3658.
  13. ↑ 13.0 13.1 Gross, Edward; Altman, Mark A. (1996). "Voyager: Season Two Episode Guide". Captains' Logs Supplemental. London, England: Little, Brown and Company. p. 154. ISBN 0-316-88354-9.
  14. ↑ "Beltran's Best". Star Trek: The Official Monthly Magazine (London, England: Titan Books Limited) 1 (20): 34. October 1996. ISSN 1357-3888.

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