Talk:Yuval Steinitz

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[edit] The Disengagement Plan

I improved the grammar in this section. Could someone take a look and decide if the editing tag can be removed. Chocom 10:00, 16 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Political Activity

The part about "joint committee of the Security Committee, composed of members from the Foreign Affairs and Defense Committees and the American Congress" can't be right. American Congressmen and Senators don't serve on Israeli parliamentary committees. The Hebrew Yuval Steinitz page says something more plausible, though still not 100% clear to me:

 "chairman of the joint security committee to the foreign affairs committee and to the US Congress"

or perhaps

 "chairman of the joint security committee to the committee on Foreign Affairs and the US Congress"

Perhaps someone more familiar with Israeli politics (i.e. what committees do and don't exist, and what it means for a body to be a "committee" to another "committee") could clear this up for us, in the interests of improving this page.

The Hebrew Yuval Steinitz page contains a good deal of extra material. Would it be a good idea to translate that material over to the English page?