Talk:Yusuf Khan and Sherbano

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[edit] Story

There are two big problems with this article:

• It consists mostly of the story section, and there is nothing about it in culture or modern references.
• The story section is way too poetic. I will look at it and try to make it sound more like it is just explaining the story, and not like it is telling one.

Mynameisnotpj (talk) 12:24, 16 April 2008 (UTC)