Talk:Yumeria
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[edit] Cleanup
Yet again, somebody added an unspecific cleanup tag without explaining why in the talk page. So I'll mention some points
- It's written in "in-world" style
- It needs to be wikified
- The text about the plot makes unmotivated tense changes.
- How is the game and important? Is it related to something else?
Anything more? I don't know enough about this article's subject to fix it myself. --GunnarRene 00:31, 14 August 2006 (UTC)
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- Apparently, it's another one in a long line of harem anime. Also, the author of the original plot review seemed to have directly taken this text and paraphrased it.
- Corrected the phrase ""Bishoujo Senshi" literally meaning "pretty soldier".)" to ""Bishoujo Senshi" literally meaning "pretty girl soldier".)"
90.227.204.204 14:54, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Characters
I did some good additions to the character part, but I think a summary of the episodes would be good. Anyone know how to add onto the table to add a summary section? Otherwise I think that's about it for this article, but I own it and love it so if anyone has any questions ask me. BioYu-Gi! 16:55, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
