Talk:YouthSPEAK International

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[edit] Tone &c

  1. I have tried to change the tone. However the article is steeped in "modern managerial" jargon. It was also very repetitive.
  2. It needs to be criticised more thoroughly. How can people of any particular age group be expected to agree, across the world?
  3. I am not sure how notable this mob is, anyway.
  4. Assuming it is notable enough, (and not just a vanity piece by Nguyen) perhaps someone sympathetic to it, who can write plainly, could try editing it. Avalon 22:19, 27 January 2006 (UTC)

~Yeah I dont think this is notable at all. Its an organisation in its infant steps and im all for it when it takes off but until then... i know a number of larger organisations doing similar work in the same country get bumped for relevance. 165.228.125.180 12:52, 30 October 2007 (UTC)