Talk:Young America's Foundation

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Recent additions by 63.121.249.2 are excessively lengthy and are so POV as to seem like advertising or PR copy from the organization. Much, if not all of it, needs to be deleted and the remainder, if any, needs to be heavily reworked to conform to NPOV. Thoughts? LeoO3 18:06, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

I deleted virtually all of the extremely POV brochure advertisement. Hopefully someone can come along and add a NPOV description of the YAF and their activities. Ari 18:53, 26 December 2005 (UTC)

[edit] NPOV?

I suggest a POV heading.........

It seems now that there is a slant against the organization......the controversy section is larger than the description of the organization itself.......I propose some research............... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.167.136.254 (talk • contribs) 23:04, 17 August 2006

I added a very short stub for a History section. Someone needs to fill it in. That should help balance the page a bit, since a minor 2006 incident should not be 2/3 of the entire page! — Lawrence King ^(talk) 05:10, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

I've removed the "controversies in 2006" section for 2 reasons. First, it belongs in a separate article about the spokesman of YAF himself, as it doesn't even say who "Mattera" is, and it has nothing to do with the YAF (or it's stance) at all. Secondly, this is not a controversy. Every politician who didn't serve in the military is asked/and says the same thing. No other source lists this as "controversial." If someone would like to create a separate article on Jason Mattera, that would be more appropriate. - DMCer 07:34, 10 July 2007 (UTC)