Talk:Yogic Yang Spiral

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Greetings. This article is less objective than it needs to be, as it makes many positive assertions about things that are pretty subjective. There are applicable and non-negotiable Wikipedia policies on such things, among them no original research, neutral point of view and cite your sources. I hope this helps. --Fire Star 18:54, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

I am still working on it to make it more neutral. I think that it is something interesting because it is such a large scale syncronous group meditation. Alternate viewpoints are possible to find. There have been yogis outside this yoga school that participated to the spirals and there are a lot of commets in the Romanian mass media. Actually they have become something of a media circus lately after 10 years of relative anonimity. Do you think the whole article does not deserve to exist?Horia 19:07, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

The article has been rewritten in the most part. I tried to put the whole yang spiral concept in the context of group meditations, effects of mass group meditations on the society and the meaning of the spiral as a symbol. Also where I could not put it in third person, I clearly stated the source and so it is not a general affirmation but a personal oppinion. I hope it will be ok now, if not, the article will have to exist with the NPOV mark. In that case at least biased content is better than no content. Fire Star, please see if you consider the article is ok now. Horia 16:24, 31 December 2005 (UTC)