Talk:Yes! I Am a Long Way from Home
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[edit] GAN on hold
- I take it there is no CD cover or anything like that?
- [1] could do with a better fair use rationale. Feel free to copy user:Giggy/Audio so it covers everything
- Some of the subsections of the Production section aren't needed, and it could read just as well without them
- "at the Monarch in London — the band's first show" - WP:DASH; em dashes shouldn't have spaces around them
- Recording subsection unsourced...
- "Scotland — where the band" - a comma would work better here
- Linking to lyrics (and quoting so much of them) is a copyright concern
- The Critical reception section should be in the past tense
- Media usage section is kinda trivia-ish...not really needed
Leave a note on my talk page when done. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 04:42, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
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Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 07:57, 7 April 2008 (UTC)