Talk:Xenosaga Episode I: Der Wille zur Macht

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[edit] Gamespot's review

Did someone get that wrong? Wikipedia has an 8.5 listed. But Gamespot's site has an 8.1? Marrshu

I fixed it. Thunderbrand 18:29, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Story section

I want to trim what I just wrote down by about 20-30 percent, wikify it, and so on. Deckiller 15:06, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] The Will to Make

I don't want to create an identity on this site, so someone please fix this. At the beginning of the article, "Der Wille zur Macht" is said to be literally translated as "The Will to Power." This is not so. The literal translation is "The Will to Make." IN CONTEXT, it's "The Will to Power."

[edit] Seiyuus

Just noting here that the voice actors will have to leave before this article is nominated as GAC again. Is there a list of characters episode somewhere? It would be more natural there.--SidiLemine 15:07, 9 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Copyediting

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This article was in the backlog of our list of articles to be proofread. I made very minor fixes. --Otheus 15:55, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

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[edit] Censorship

Another scene with sexual connotations was also cut.
Which scene? The other points are expanded upon a bit more than this. -masa ♫ 17:15, 30 November 2007 (UTC)

- Well, in the scene where Albedo tries to extract the Y-Data from MOMO, he "penetrates" her stomach with his hand, which he kinda enjoys...^^ —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.174.249.59 (talk) 19:08, 6 January 2008 (UTC)

Huh, that sounds more like a sadistic pleasure than anything sexual to me, but I guess you could maybe argue that that's a sexual paraphilia. I'm unconvinced, but not enough to edit it... -masa ♫ 20:25, 6 January 2008 (UTC)

But it's the only scene aside from Albedo's "knife play" which has been heavily modified for the NA release, so it should be notable. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.174.241.65 (talk) 19:07, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

I'm not questioning that, just whether it was censored due to "sexual connotations". -masa ♫ 00:10, 10 January 2008 (UTC)