Talk:X-linked ichthyosis
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This is a major expansion and deserves credit. However, it's also a personal experience essay, and needs to be re-written to sound like it belongs in an encyclopedia instead of in a blog. I've updated the WPMED assessment, but a re-write into a more formal style (that, for example, doesn't say things like "as far as I know" or refer to the experience of any individual editor) could earn it another upgrade. WhatamIdoing (talk) 19:31, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
- Have done a quick first pass, needs references to back up the opinions, but have left them in but less personal now.. Leevanjackson (talk) 00:22, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
