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[edit] pre-GA review

I'm going to take this piece by piece.

[edit] Lead

1. the other being --> the first being
2. I think that the Smackdown main event should come before Raw's considering the Smackdown match was last.
3. which Orton won by pinning Cena after a Pedigree from Triple H --> which Orton won by pinning Cena after Triple H delivered a Pedigree to Cena
4. Wiki-link "highest-grossing" if it's possible

I'll get to the report later on. iMatthew 2008 19:15, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Y Done -- Oakster  Talk  21:16, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Background

1. the following pay-per-view. should be the pay-per-view following the Royal Rumble or just removed.
2. slapping the referee slapping --> hitting
3. general manager should be capitalized.
4. if Special Guest is capitalized, then "referee" should be as well.
5. assistant general manager should be capitalized.
6. Smackdown wasn't the night after No Way Out
7. Refs are needed for the first paragraph.
8. will come to an end --> would come to an end
9. he defeats him should be more specific
10. comma after mentions of "Curt Hawkins" when it comes before "and Zack Ryder" and after "Edge, "
11. On the March 21 edition of SmackDown, after The Undertaker defeated Chavo Guerrero, Edge attacked The Undertaker, and executed a spear. Shortly after, Edge, Hawkins and Ryder hit him numerous times with steel chairs, which concluded with Edge executing a con-chair-to. is not really notable, it seems week-by-week
12. The picture caption for Mayweather shouldn't be a sentence. It should say "Floyd Mayweather, who..."
13. "it would be an honor for him to retire at the hands of Shawn Michaels." "i"t should be capitalized.
14. Every one of the match results in the last paragraph need to have a source.

More coming later on the event/aftermath. iMatthew 2008 15:38, 3 May 2008 (UTC)

Points 1-6, 8-13 are Y Done. I'll get back to the other points later. -- Oakster  Talk  07:55, 4 May 2008 (UTC)