Talk:Worms Forts: Under Siege

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[edit] The problems

  • Incorrect spelling. Example - "defencless"
  • Contradictions. Example - "A strong defenceless"
  • Written in an opinionated way. Example - "They looked wooden, with the occasional metal."
  • Incorrect tone. Example - "A very deciesive building"
  • Useless trivia. Examples - "The fortapedia mixes up some of the weapons.", "Homing Pigeon has a very bad AI, and can crash into the ground.", "Super Hippo is very similar to Super Sheep." and "The Greek theme is very much like Roman."
  • Usage of abbreviations inappropriate for articles. Example - "new forts & castles"
  • Reads slightly like a manual. Example - "The hub of your empire. Without it, you will lose."
  • Uses words inappropriate for articles. Example - "Without it, you will lose."

This article CANNOT be edited to fix these problems. There needs to be a COMPLETE rewrite.

This article can easily be edited to fix these problems? Don't see why it needs a complete rewrite either. Plus sign your posts please using the four tildes ~ --Fujita 14:15, 29 October 2007 (UTC)