Talk:Wolf of the Plains

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[edit] Plot Description

This is slightly misleading: "Temujin's father is killed by Tartar assassins on his return from the journey. Temujin quickly returns to the Wolves, but Yesughi's first bondsman, Eeluk assumes control of the tribe."

I think this is better:

"Temujin's father is attacked by Tartar assassins on his return from the journey. Temujin quickly returns to the Wolves, but his father soon dies from his injuries. Yesughi's first bondsman, Eeluk assumes control of the tribe." —Preceding unsigned comment added by Life.temp (talk • contribs) 14:57, 13 June 2008 (UTC)