Talk:Without Walls Central Church

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Assessment comments The following comments were left by the assessors: (edit · refresh) I think that this article is completely biased in not telling the "whole" story of Without Walls Church. They are currently being investigated for their shadiness and theft from their patrons. Enclosed is a link to an article as reported on www.tbo.com. http://www.tbo.com/news/metro/MGB9CH2XW1F.html

[edit] Neutral Point of View

I notice that this page has been marked as not being neutral, but there's nothing in the talk page. I assume it was marked because of phrases like "God knew the season of their lives was approaching when they would be ready to enlarge their boundaries for greater responsibility".

I have now attempted to rewrite the article in a more neutral tone, although it's still not the most readable article I've seen. I guess it can be up to someone else to decide on whether it's neutral enough.

Michael2 10:36, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Frankly, the first question I'd ask is this: Is the subject of the article notable? If the answer to that is yes, then there will be verifiable information out there to help us rewrite the article. If not, then no amount of rewriting is going to help, because without that notability we're not going to have the sources to back what is written. No offense to your good efforts; I appreciate editors who make the decision to be bold & rewrite as needed. Happy editing! -- JeffBillman (talk) 21:25, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Kay Fields

Polk County School Board Member Kay Fields is a member of this cult. She was recently in the news after she said Creationism "needs" to be included in the public school system. Perhaps the article could include a brief mention of Ms. Field. --69.19.14.35 (talk) 18:20, 18 November 2007 (UTC)