Talk:Wind power in Texas
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[edit] Good article nomination on hold
This article's Good Article promotion has been put on hold. During review, some issues were discovered that can be resolved without a major re-write. This is how the article, as of August 10, 2007, compares against the six good article criteria:
- 1. Well written?: Good.
- 2. Factually accurate?: Good.
- 3. Broad in coverage?: The coverage is good; however, the article's organization is problematic. The last part from "King Mountain Wind Farm (278 MW)" to "Sand Bluff Wind Farm (90 MW)" seems too much like a list, and the article has too many sections.
- 4. Neutral point of view?: Good.
- 5. Article stability? Good.
- 6. Images?: A few images would improve the article.
Please address these matters soon and then leave a note here showing how they have been resolved. After 48 hours the article should be reviewed again. If these issues are not addressed within 7 days, the article may be failed without further notice. Thank you for your work so far. King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 19:07, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- It is stable.
- It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
- a (tagged and captioned): b lack of images (does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 19:07, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing. I have requested that an image be included in the article, using the reqphoto tag above. I have also removed some section headings to make the article less like a list. I have also expanded one section, and as more info becomes available will be able to expand other sections. -- Johnfos 21:51, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
- If images are the only problem, then I'm going to promote this, that's not a reason to not promote. Wizardman 19:18, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
Not promoted. The structural problem with the list of the various wind farms has not been fixed. -- King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 05:29, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
- This problem has now been overcome, as only five of the largest wind farms are listed separately now... Johnfos 22:11, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] DHMO's GA review (on hold)
- The "Summary table: Wind farms in Texas" table doesn't look too good - I think the redlinks should be removed. You should also play around with the column widths - the second column is too narrow, and the header looks bad.
- Got another image? 2 would be better then one, if relevant.
- A lot of the redlinks throughout the article should be removed, or the article created.
- Other wind farms section - convert to list/table. I've tagged it for this - the way it's written now isn't good, as it's clearly a list but is disguised as prose.
Those are my GA comments (aswell as anything/everything requested above that hasn't been done) - and below is an auto-PR for some extra suggestions. Dihydrogen Monoxide (H2O) 04:58, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
- There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City.[?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 24 km, use 24 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 24 km.[?] - Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.”
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
- The script has spotted the following contractions: couldn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Dihydrogen Monoxide (H2O) 04:58, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
- Gee, Giggy, I think you're being a bit tough, and will just have to accept that this article is not going to be a GA. Thanks anyway... Johnfos 06:26, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Template needs to be moved
Hi Anphibian, and thank you for another useful template. But I really think it needs to be put at the end of the article. To have it in the "See also" section interrupts the flow of the article. Johnfos 20:26, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
- Have moved template now... Johnfos 00:49, 31 October 2007 (UTC)