Talk:Wimbledon Effect

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[edit] Clarification

Sincerely, I think the crux of the Wimbleton Effect could be laid out more clearly. I had to go through the first two paragraphs more than once before I was sure I understood. Perhaps an opener along the lines of:

The Wimbledon Effect is an analogy comparing the success of the London's financial community, which is dominated by foreign companies, with the the Championships at Wimbleton, a renowned tennis tournament which has been rarely been won by players from the United Kingdom.

I know my suggestion here won't be any good word-for-word...I'm not that aquainted with London despite having been born there and I know even less about Wimbledon. I hope this suggestion is helpful. Badgering your work was never my intent. Shaundakulbara 12:16, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

I'll try to lay out the content more clearly. I don't think explanation of each term is necessary in wikipedia articles due to the use of wikilinks, but I agree that the article could be made to be easier to follow. Bwithh 12:30, 3 February 2007 (UTC)