Talk:William Thompson (New York)

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This article needs to be rewritten to eliminate bias, mostly be eliminating superfluous adverbs and phrases, such as "consistently employed" or "aggressively". It is certainly a more thorough article now that the subject has rewritten it, but it needs a third party to rewrite with a more objective viewpoint.

This article is clearly written as a political campaign advertisement. There is very little (if any) support for most of the statements made. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.149.81.4 (talk) 21:44, 11 June 2008 (UTC)

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The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article.-- Jreferee 22:50, 12 March 2007 (UTC)