Talk:William Shunn

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An individual covered by or significantly related to this article, William Shunn, has edited Wikipedia as Shunn (talk · contribs)

There are several controversial, POV statements in the article, such as "devout", "arrested", "false", "his mission", "often", and "private". There is no way of checking the veracity of these statements from public sources. The word "first", used twice, must be verified from a NPOV source. "Work often draws on" needs a neutral review. I am inserting cites needed. Bearian 17:11, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

I see improvements. Thank you for taking the criticism well. Bearian 19:51, 18 April 2007 (UTC)