Talk:William McDonough

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[edit] Cleanup

Adjusted phrasing of claims to make entry more encyclopedic and less obvious marketing. Although McDonough is clearly a sustainable leader, much of the article seems to be copied directly from his website (marketing his firms' services). Details of the sustainable aspects of the River Rogue Plant moved to project page as it pertains to the architectural feature, not the designer. Mahalie 03:08, 30 June 2007 (UTC)