Talk:Will Haven

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I tried to start cleaning up this page, but honestly I don't know where to begin. The article switches tone and tense throughout, and contains much material that fais to meet NPOV or is at least unverifiable ("began to get a following"), etc. It contains what seems to be a "blow-by-blow" commentary on the band's progress in the past year, which seems inappropriate to a timeless Wikipedia. I'm not even sure the band meets the proper notability criteria. Help! Bushing 06:08, 14 February 2006 (UTC)

• I better collated the info; fixed tenses and grammatical errors; made the final paragraph not look like it was written by a ten-year-old; deleted various unnecessary crap; etc. Still needs attention, though; while i listen to the band (and think they're notable), i know nothing about them. Kevin Doran 22:08, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
• While it's not on my username, rather on my IP, i added as much info as i could find, to the article. Kevin Doran 18:01, 21 May 2006 (UTC)