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[edit] The Darkest Hour (Warriors)
This is a kind of low-scale article on the last book of the Warriors series. I'd like to see it up at GA, but I'm concerned that there isn't enough info. Some review on the writing quality and suggestions to bring it to GA would be greatly appreciated. Inkpelt 15:32, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
- Article has a good start the writing style is ok to me although what is there is very "In-Universe". It would be better to have more publication relevant information, reviews, reception, critical comment, assessments of "success", publication history etc. All in all more "real-world" material. :: Kevinalewis : (Talk Page)/(Desk) 08:17, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oh yes the other thing I wouldn't put the plot section headings in as such. At most "embolden" them and then they don't appear in the contents list at the top. Overkill!. :: Kevinalewis : (Talk Page)/(Desk) 08:19, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
- Okay, I'll bold the headings and remove the sections. I'm having trouble finding "publication relevant" info because the books are such... low-scale. Well, they're popular among eight to twelve year olds mostly, so there haven't been many reviews and such. Inkpelt 00:37, 25 September 2007 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Inkpelt (talk • contribs)
- Found and added some significance info, reference and independent review- trust that helps. :: Kevinalewis : (Talk Page)/(Desk) 10:25, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
