Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Treaty of Versailles

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[edit] Treaty of Versailles

I think this article is very important and the article itself is well written in my opinion. I helped a little bit in some sections and thought it could use a peer review. Cheif Captain 19:07, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

Not a bad start, but still lots of work needed:

• Citations are needed throughout.
• The bulleted lists should generally be converted to prose. As it stands, the article's overall flow is quite choppy.
• The mammoth "See also" section should be eliminated. Ideally, creating a navigation template for the treaties which ended WWI would remove the need for most of these links.
• "Alternative viewpoints" needs to be integrated into "Historical assessments", and both sections ought to be expanded. The question of whether the treaty was a good one has been the topic of extensive historiography, which can be discussed in rather more detail than is present here.

Kirill Lokshin 22:03, 7 April 2007 (UTC)