Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/South Atlantic Medal
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[edit] South Atlantic Medal
I've recently made some big edits to the article and would like to know what people think. Due to a lack of "Style Guide" from the "WikiProject Orders, Decorations, and Medals", I instead took inspiration from the Victoria Cross article. Ryan4314 (talk) 12:38, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Kirill Lokshin
A good start, but there are still some areas that could use further work:
- The lead is quite short, and could probably be expanded a bit.
- There's no material about the creation and adoption of the medal.
- I'd suggest moving both obverse and reverse images into the infobox.
- In general, any additional information would be beneficial for an article this short.
Hope that helps! Kirill 23:11, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
