Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Operation Storm
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[edit] Operation Storm
I completely rewrote this article a while back, adding maps, references etc. I think it's in a pretty good shape now - it had been the subject of extensive edit-warring between partisan editors, which thankfully now seems to have ceased. I would appreciate a peer-review. -- ChrisO 22:29, 24 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Kirill Lokshin
Hmm, let's see:
- The list of figures at the bottom should be turned into prose.
- Lots of citation is needed here, as it's almost entirely absent.
- The day-by-day sections are very short; if they can't be expanded, it might be better to merge them into more substantial blocks of prose.
This still has quite a lot of work needed, I think. Kirill Lokshin 00:28, 25 July 2006 (UTC)