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[edit] James River Squadron

One of my first articles and just want to make sure I'm doing things right plange 03:46, 29 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

Very nice article! Some suggestions you might want to consider:

• The lead section should eventually be two or three paragraphs; but this will probably require adding some more material to the article.
• The composition section might be expanded by adding some details (no more than a few sentences) about each ship and its role in the squadron; it'll look a bit more like article text and a bit less like a plain list of links.
• Inline citations would be useful.
• Are any more details about the squadron's formation and its early activities available? The bulk of the article seems to focus on post-1862 material.

Overall, though, the article is off to a great start! Kirill Lokshin 03:57, 29 May 2006 (UTC)