Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Gepard anti-materiel rifles

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[edit] Gepard anti-materiel rifles

I've nominated this article for peer review in an attempt to guage my writing and find ways to improve it. I started this article and have done all the writing.Shoe1127 03:17, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

A nice start to the article. Some general suggestions:

• Inline citation is a must. I personally prefer using footnotes, but there are a number of other possible styles as well.
• The "Ammunition" and "Service" sections are very short. It might be worthwhile to merge the ammunition into the "Description" section. The service section could use expansion, if you can find any sources: where were they reported used? What units field them? Are they used in training exercises? And so forth.
• The lead could probably be expanded to two paragraphs.
• The "Comparison with M-82" section is too generally worded to be useful. Who is doing the comparisons, and who prefers the Gepard?

Overall, though, not bad. Kirill Lokshin 16:51, 18 July 2006 (UTC)