Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Wuhan

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[edit] Battle of Wuhan

This article was a stub with three sentences before I expanded it in July. I currently want to do further research & writing on this topic, and was hoping to get some peer reviews first for the article. AQu01rius (User | Talk | Websites)  04:45, 31 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

Off to a good start. Lots of things to work on:

• More citations throughout (ideally from reputable historical works more so than from primary sources).
• Massive wikification would be appropriate; most of the units in question should (eventually) get their own articles.
• The list of commanders in the infobox seems somewhat excessive; I'd trim it down to the major ones only.
• The lead should grow in proportion to the article, reaching an eventual length of three or four paragraphs.

Overall, though, the most important thing is simply to add more material. This is obviously a major battle, and I'm guessing that there are enough sources available to expand the article significantly. Keep up the great work! Kirill Lokshin 02:23, 1 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] oldwindybear

This is improved, but still needs some work. It was one of the most significant battles of the second Sino-Japanese War, and can still use more detail. It also needs heavy citation througout. However, it is vastly improved, and I don't want to discourage an editor who put a great amount of effort into this! You have gotten mostly there - do on and finish it up! old windy bear 15:20, 11 November 2006 (UTC)