Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Vukovar
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[edit] Battle of Vukovar
I completely rewrote this article a while back, adding maps, references etc. I think it's in a pretty good shape now - it had been the subject of extensive edit-warring between partisan editors, which thankfully now seems to have ceased. I would appreciate a peer-review. -- ChrisO 22:28, 24 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Kirill Lokshin
Quite nice, assuming the edit-warring doesn't pick up again ;-)
Some suggestions:
- Expand the lead to two or three paragraphs.
- More footnotes would be appropriate. There are still some "citation needed" tags in the article that need to be fixed, at a minimum.
- "Casualties" should come before "Aftermath", no?
- Can you stub out some of the redlinks?
Overall, this isn't bad; but more thorough citation and some copyediting would do well here. Kirill Lokshin 00:21, 25 July 2006 (UTC)
