Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Cannon/Archive 1

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[edit] Cannon

Recently passed GA review, and also the main article for the cannon article series. --Grimhelm 09:21, 5 June 2007 (UTC)

• Comment. Seems okay except that large portions of the text are uncited and there are a few one sentence paragraphs. If those can be fixed, I can support. CLA 02:00, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
• Comment. I agree with Cla I think it needs to be more thoroughly cited before I can support. Kyriakos 10:54, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
• Support the citation now appears adequate. However, I would consider removing the "See Also" section, and incorporating the links into the text. Carom 16:54, 8 June 2007 (UTC)

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