Wikipedia:WikiProject Louisville/Peer review/SHPS
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[edit] SHPS
I would like t o get this article to good article or status and I am sort of stuck. Any input would be greatly sppreciated. M-BMor 03:18, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
- It looks like it needs inline citations. ShadowHalo 20:23, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
- Added intext ref. Thanks for the feedback M-BMor 21:11, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Some suggestions:
- The article reads like it was written by a publicity firm. Isn't there any criticism or impartial coverage of this firm?
- There seem to be a lot of inappropriate capitalizations of words. E.g. "...including Large market...", "...include Health plans...", "...Though Based in...", &c.
- More wikilinks are needed.
- It's Colmes, not Combs.
- The inline citations should use proper cite templates and be placed following punctuation marks.
Thank you.— RJH (talk) 16:38, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
- Thank you corrected colmes, moved the cites behind punctuation, wikilinked some more things. Trying to make it sound more "encyclopedic"..M-BMor 17:54, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
- The expansion of the history section would be great, and some expansion/citing on the locations would help as well.--Wizardman 03:08, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
