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[edit] Six o'clock swill

This article was the subject of a former Australian collaboration. I am interested in views of other wikipedians as to what would make this article better, particularly for an audience who perhaps doesn't have an Australian background. Matilda ^talk 22:27, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

Review by Phoenix-wiki (talk · contribs)

I think the introduction needs expanding so it gives a brief summary of the rest of article, rather than just a sentence on what the 6 o'clock swill is. An extra image would be good, and then you'd be well on your way to GA--Phoenix-wiki ^{talk · contribs} 19:26, 23 December 2007 (UTC)