Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/The Wiggles

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[edit] The Wiggles

I would like this article to have a higher rating, from B to A and eventually to FA status. There has already been a general assessment of it, but I feel that it needs more input. It's an important topic, since as the article states, The Wiggles is the highest-grossing entertainers in Australia, and have influenced countless children and their families worldwide. --Figureskatingfan (talk) 05:43, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Yannismarou

• The lead is short. Check WP:LEAD.

"Using his connections with the Cockroaches, Field arranged with the Australian Broadcasting Corporation (ABC) to distribute their album in Australia. Their manager suggested that they tour.[3][8] Their public debut was at a pre-school in Randwick." Some choppy prose.

• I am not sure about "Cultural References". The section looks listy, like trivia. Couldn't it get some proper prose?
• "Honours" could also become a proper paragraph of prose.
• Don't put in "See also" articles you have already linked above, such as List of The Wiggles songs.

References look fine to me. With some more tweaks I think the article could get GA status and then FA.--Yannismarou (talk) 15:50, 18 December 2007 (UTC)