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[edit] Rich Vogler

This was rated as a stub class, however I believe it is start class now, hence the review for assessment purposes. That's pretty much all. -- Guroadrunner 12:44, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Gran2

Yep, definitely start class now. Gran2 15:17, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Automated review

  • Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:09, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Yannismarou

  • You star straight away with his racing career. Personal life? Family? Early years?
  • I suggest you turn the red links into stubs.
  • Add in your references publisher or work or writer.
  • You have many stubby paragraphs which are not good for the prose and the article's flow. You need to work on that.
  • A second review will be definitely needed, because the article is at an initial stage of writing.--Yannismarou 11:10, 17 May 2007 (UTC)