Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Josias Philip Hoffman

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[edit] Josias Philip Hoffman

This article is part of a series of Orange Free State biographies. This biography on a South African Boer politician from the nineteenth century has been completely rewritten. However, information from published sources is scarce. Therefore, we are looking for a class=Start in both Projects listed, with a view to class=B. Review comments are heartily invited. Michel Doortmont (talk) 22:25, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

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• Please consider adding {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.^[?]

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• This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as it could be. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.^[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 12:40, 2 April 2008 (UTC)