Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Joseph Hazelwood
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[edit] Joseph Hazelwood
I have made some changes to the article recently, the article doesn't have much traffic and I would like some feedback and a peer review to further improve the article. Thank you. Dual Freq 23:10, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Yannismarou
Good article overall. Have you thought of nominating it for GA? A few remarks:
- Sections "Family" and "Education" are short. You must expand them or merge them into a new section named "Family and Education" or "Early years". Further information about his early years are welcomed.
- At the top of the chapter "Exxon Valdez Oil Spill" you could link to the main article Exxon Valdez oil spill, using this template:
- Your story stops in 2002. Don't we know anything about him after this year?
- Section "Pop culture references" should be turned into prose. As it is now, it looks like a Trivia section, which is not recommended.
- Thanks for the review, not much has been said about him in the last few years. His last mention that I could find was around the 15th anniversary of the oil spill in 2004, but it was just a rehash of the other material. All I can find is that he still lives in Long Island (or at least pays taxes on a house there), but not much else. I've prosified the pop culture, and merged the early years section. I'd like to find some better pictures and more information about early years, but news articles didn't say much about siblings and I really had to dig to find the name of his daughter. That section is pretty much the best I can do right now. Thanks again. Dual Freq 23:20, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
