Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Johnny Bright

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[edit] Johnny Bright

This article about an important mid-20th century American college and professional Canadian football player has been well referenced and cited using a variety of reputable sources. I believe the article should be rated above "B" class, and is worthy of being a "good" and even a "featured" article. I am open to any suggestions to make this article better. Sundevilesq 14:55, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 15:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Yannismarou

• No info about his family background, and his childhood.
• Your section about ""Johnny Bright Incident"" is almost as long as the main article. Check WP:SS and act accordingly.
• Per WP:MoS do not wikiling single years, only day-month-year.
• It would be nice if you could expand "Post-football career". You could also merge it with "Death".--Yannismarou 18:40, 8 September 2007 (UTC)