Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Hayden Panettiere
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[edit] Hayden Panettiere
This article has not been rated for quality yet. I think it qualifies for B-status, and I'd like to know what can be done to improve it to GA status. - fmmarianicolon | Talk 16:16, 2 February 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Yannismarou
IMO the article is at a start stage, and it needs much more work. A new peer-review will probably be needed. This is my review:
- The lead is too short. Have a look at WP:LEAD.
- "Background" and "Personal life" are stubby. Expand.
- Avoid one-sentence paragraphs. Merge or expand.
- Why don't you put the photo in the infobox.
- The prose is often choppy ("Panettiere was born in Palisades, New York to Lesley Vogel and Skip Panettiere. She has Italian ancestry.[1] (Panettiere means baker in Italian). Her mother also used to be an actress.") and repetitive ("She also recently appeared on an episode of Punk'd, as an accomplice in punking her boyfriend, Stephen Colletti. She also has guest starred in Law & Order: SVU.")
- Some paragraphs and sub-sections have no citations or are under-citated. Try to have at least one citation for each paragraph.
- Further info treating her biography, music, career etc. would be welcome.--Yannismarou 20:57, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
