Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Grover Cleveland

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[edit] Grover Cleveland

I was hoping to submit this for FA, but wanted someone else to review it first to help make sure it's ready to go. Coemgenus 15:08, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Some minor points

• Repetition of the family surname in "Cleveland was the fifth of nine children born to Richard and Ann Cleveland" and "The Clevelands had five children: Ruth Cleveland (1891–1904); Esther Cleveland (1893–1980); Marion Cleveland (1895–1977); Richard Folsom Cleveland (1897–1974); and Francis Grover Cleveland (1903–1995)." is slightly tedious.
• The sections on Supreme Court appointments and Utah's admission to the Union are very short. I would either turn them into infoboxes or merge them with other sections.
• The secondary sources lack publisher information, but the section is already lengthy, so I don't know whether adding them would be worthwhile.
• I enjoyed reading the article, it held my interest all the way through. DrKiernan (talk) 15:29, 28 February 2008 (UTC)