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[edit] Elizabeth Clare Prophet

This is a request for peer review by scholars, Wikipedians, and other interested parties prior to nominating this article for GA status. BlackSun 21:55, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Yannismarou

The article looks to me comprehensive and informative, but there are several problems. Most importantly:

• There are no inline citations.
• Some sections are full of one-sentence paragraphs, like "Mark Prophet". In this case I recommend rewriting.
• You could create a seperate article about the doctrine, and have here a summary of it. The current section is too long and not strictly related to Prophet's life, but to her church as well.
• These red links in the lead are not so nice. Delink them or create stubs.
• Why 5 paragraphs in the lead? And why the last one is so stubby. Check WP:LEAD to see how a lead should be exactly.
• ISBNs and publshers in books?
• "Controversial Issues" are also more about the church and not about Prophet. I thnik that you should think what material should remain in this article and what should go to a sub-article or to the church's article.--Yannismarou 12:16, 29 November 2006 (UTC)