Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Augustus Jones

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[edit] Augustus Jones

I've worked this article up to B-class status, but apart from a little feedback while it was on the front page, I've gotten very little feedback. I'm aiming to push it to Good Article status at the moment, with maybe an eye towards FA after that's done, if I can. Any feedback would be appreciated, but especially layout, flow and appropriate depth. Mr Lemon (talk) 19:21, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

For FA, you would need to expand the lead, and probably expand or merge the very short sections. DrKiernan (talk) 12:20, 2 April 2008 (UTC)