Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Sai Baba of Shirdi

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[edit] Sai Baba of Shirdi

Well sourced, well written biography which has just received GA status. Kkrystian 17:18, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

  • Oppose - too many redlinks, too few refernce citations. There should be at least one, preferably two, citations per paragraph. Article also lacks WP:PERSONDATA. Lastly, there should be only one kind of reference link in an article. This article employs two kind of reference links, particularly in the "Film & Television" section. Only one type should be employed per article. John Carter 19:29, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
  • Comment: I am surprised that the GA reviewer did not mention this, but there are too many one or two sentence paragraphs (see WP:BETTER under Paragraphs). This disturbs the flow while reading. The divisions into short subsections does not help either. --RelHistBuff 07:15, 9 October 2007 (UTC)