Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Elmer Gedeon

We hope to bring this to FA status.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 20:21, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

Object. I think that what this article needs is a peer-review and not an A-Class review. The prose is too choppy in many parts of it (see for instance the second paragraph of the lead, and "Collegiate athletics", where we have the combination of choppy prose and a stubby par). A copyediting is definitely needed. In the printed source of notes 9-10 I don't see any pages.--Yannismarou (talk) 17:07, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
Oppose - At least one single sentence paragraph, and one two-sentence paragraph. Possibly excessive reliance on quotes. John Carter (talk) 14:35, 26 March 2008 (UTC)