Talk:Whitfield, Kent/Comments

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The main weaknesses of this article are:

  • primarily, that it is completely POV - ie that it simply dwells on the modern aspects of the place: nothing about the fact that it is one of the oldest of all Kent parishes!
  • how can there be 8000+ people living there when the info box clearly says 4600 three years ago?
  • too many external links - which should be turned into references
  • reference to the future development are both undated
  • reference to Dover Pride (incorrect) is not referred to in the article Peter Shearan (talk) 10:30, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
I have now rewritten the article to bring it into line with my comments above. More needed, of course! Peter Shearan (talk) 14:12, 9 February 2008 (UTC)