Talk:Western theater of the American Revolutionary War

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[edit] NPOV and Tone tags

I have added the NPOV and tone tags to this article because of the edit from an anon on 8 March 2007. That edit uses terms such as "genocided", "utterly genocide", and "murderously killed" which fail for stylistic and grammatical reasons. They also express a strongly-held point of view and are not neutral in tone. It may be that the edit adds valuable content, but it is not expressed in an encylopedic manner. Unless it is revised, corrected, and copyedited, the may end up being deleted entirely. If the facts are as the contributor states them, then let those facts speak for themselves (with cites to authority) and forego the adverbs. Kablammo 17:32, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Deleted; article was reverted to a prior version. Kablammo 10:13, 9 March 2007 (UTC)