Talk:West Virginia University Downtown Library

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Overall I think this page looks really good. It has a lot of short sections which follows the general Wikipedia style and all the information seems solid. Maybe you could just add a couple more pictures of the inside of the library or something like that, but other than that the page looks very professional.

Rapenich (talk) 18:48, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

I would edit the lead paragraph a bit. Use a colon before the list of other libraries. Somewhere in there I think you need to indicate that it's the top research library for the university (possibly for the state? I don't know). I think you might want some statistics? How many books are there? Also, who are some of the key people - chief librarian? etc. Who runs things?--Sandybaldwin (talk) 18:50, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

Don't know if this works... Your page looks very professional but I would work a bit on the styling of the article because at some points it begins to sound like an advertisement. Also, obviously some categories need to be finished. There is A LOT of information here. Could any of it be condensed? Etoile bleu (talk) 18:50, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

Overall I think this page looks really good. It's well organized and is broken up into lots of short sections which is a big part of the Wikipedia style. I think if you guys would just add a couple more pictures it would make the page even better. MPalangio (talk) 18:55, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

I don't know if I would recommend changing anything outside of what others have already said. The layout looks good, and the article has a nice flow to it. It is a bit long, but then again what student doesn't already know a good bit about our own university's library. If I were an outside reader truly interested in learning about the WVU Wise library this article would be perfect.--Trumper1824 (talk) 18:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

Hey guys great article, no joke. My only idea is the actual layout of the site just make sure your presentation gets all the important information out in just a few sentences here and there. Izivkovi (talk) 19:04, 28 February 2008 (UTC)