Talk:Wealden iron industry/Comments

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• Most sections are too short, there are a couple that consist of just one sentence. These need to be expanded.
• Throughout the article various sites are mentioned eg a dozen sites have been identified. Where are these sites? One or two examples should be given, and elaborated upon if possible.
• The Roman ironmaking paragraph stops in mid sentence! The decline continued and only one ironmaking.......?
• See Automated peer review for Manual of Style comments.