Talk:Wayne Lo

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Perhaps the whole "more excluded" justification should be cited or changed, e.g. see this recent interview response: "I was basically your typical normal kid. I wasn’t an outcast in high school. I was the kind of kid who made them feel isolated. <QUESTION> So did that make you an outsider there? They didn’t like me. I felt defensive toward them, like, "If you don’t like me then I don’t like you." But I did have a close group of friends at Simon’s Rock." http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/18442224/site/newsweek

He puts out other views re: shootings as such, guns, etc. may be relevant to include now, as it seems he is getting some attention recently. ANON 08 May 07 814

[edit] "more excluded"?!?

This sentence jumped out at me much more so than any other. Who did what that specifically excluded Wayne from what? If anything, citing only my own, first-person account of events, propose replacing this:

"Lo steadily became more and more excluded by his fellow students."

with this:

During his final semester at Simon's Rock, Lo exhibited behaviors which further alienated him from the community.

Hugh8jasshugh8jass —Preceding signed but undated comment was added at 22:45, 10 October 2007 (UTC)