Talk:Warwick Manufacturing Group

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This reads an awful lot like an advert and not much like an informative page. A quick glance at their webpage suggests that much of this piece is lifted straight from their blurb.... Jtlh2 10:29, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] I apologise, I was working quickly!

Sorry about making it like an ad. I'm the person responsible for developing the website and I did lift the copy from there. It's my first major edit of a Wikipedia page so please forgive my naivete. I've altered the page so maybe it's acceptable. I am happy to make further changes if necessary. I will add to it to make it more informative, this is just a first stab. Very pleased to have been picked up so soon though as I only did this edit last night!Zoehoward 19:01, 14 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Removing the advertising alert

How can I get the alert message removed from the page? Zoehoward 15:34, 15 May 2007 (UTC)

I have cleaned up the article to better conform with our content policies. It will be good if you can supply some secondary sources. See WP:V and WP:CITE. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 15:51, 15 May 2007 (UTC)