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[edit] Peer Review Request: Third Servile War
As per my own inclination, and Kirill Lokshin's suggestion, I would like to ask you if you would take a look at the current peer review for the article Third Servile War. Any feedback and suggestions for improvement would be very much appeciated, thank you :) - Vedexent 20:05, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Fac review
You had commented on here for the FA review of Operation Wrath of God. The article has undergone some changes since then, including more criticism and the addition of comments by some Palestinians. If you get the chance I'd appreciate your thoughts on it. Thanks, Joshdboz 23:58, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
Thanks for your support! Joshdboz 21:20, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Third Servile War (redux)
I've revamped the article substantially based on your input, and that of others, in the various review processes. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, I would appeciate it if you could give the article another once-over and add any further comments you might have on the changes and the article's current state to the peer review. Thank you :) - Vedexent 09:44, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] La Ciociara
Quote from La Ciociara....When both are raped by Goumiers serving in the French Army, the daughter suffers a nervous breakdown. It stars Sophia Loren, Jean-Paul Belmondo, Eleonora Brown, Carlo Ninchi and Andrea Checchi.
No comment required. By the way, I wonder if you have seen the movie as I did. Greetings. --Giovanni Giove 14:51, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- Of course not. You give a link to a description of the content and I can read. As long as it is no link saying Goumier, it is no source. Simple logic. Wandalstouring 14:57, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Return of Châlons
Here's a draft I'dd like to know if I'm on the right track for what you had in mind. Suggestiosn are appreciated. Note that the length of time it took to produce had more to do with my searching for individual peoples and leaders involved. Of wich there is scant information for the disposition of forces at Châlons.--Dryzen 22:05, 21 September 2006 (UTC) hmm rather huge no...? I'll make it smaller in v0.2 .--Dryzen 22:06, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
I should put the wikibreak template. Well, the size is OK, we can scale it down, but the battle started in the late afternoon and I doubt they camped in battle order the night before, as shown on the map. take a different symbol for the camp (Huns and Germanics round camp, Romans square camp) perhaps you can show the development of the battle with some arrows from position 1 to position 2. The size of the army sign are comparatively huge compared to the landscape size, perhaps they could be tinner. Good job. Wandalstouring 23:09, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
- Update: I'm completely changing the style of the map, gone are the army blocks. Hopefully things will stay quiet around me long enough to actully finish it once and for all... --Dryzen 16:34, 28 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Third Servile War (yet again!)
In your original response to the peer review of the article, you stated that you had some ideas as to what social changes were triggered by the war. Do you have any references, or ideas where I could look to track down such changes? - Vedexent 19:05, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
- I still have it in my head, because I read it in a history book. I will try to get this info. But at the moment everything progresses very slowly. Wandalstouring 19:09, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
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- No rush :) I just had recalled you had mentioned it. If you find it, it would be appeciated, but if you don't have the time, that's OK as well :) - Vedexent 19:17, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the source for the Third Servile War. I managed to track down some changes to Roman Law as well, and spun that into a more comprehensive Aftermath section. Hopefully the article won't seem to end so abruptly now. - Vedexent 10:36, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Diplomacy
Hello Wandalstouring. Thank you for signing up for Diplomacy. As a fellow player, I would recommend that you input your e-mail address into Wikipedia so that secret negotiations can be made. Starhood` 23:35, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Anon Edits
Given the link front and center on your user page, I am somewhat surprised to see you defend anon edits. - Vedexent (talk) - 11:21, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Where to request help from WP:MILHIST members?
- Crossposted to User talk:Grafikm fr
Hello, I see you are a coordinator on WP:MILHIST so I reckon you are a right person to ask this: I need attention from WP:MILHIST community on Mirko Norac article, where do I request such attention? --Dijxtra 13:39, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
- Oh, no, I didn't ask you this so you would add him to the watchlist, I needed to get the whole MILHIST community's attention, and I did that by posting on Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history. So, the issue is settled, I decided to abandon the article after I realised that nobody understands my position (and when nobody understands your position, you are the one who's wrong). --Dijxtra 21:49, 3 October 2006 (UTC)
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- You are wrong with this conclusion. If nobody understands your position you didn't explain it good enough or the other does not want to understand (happens quite often here). I liked your work. Wandalstouring 21:59, 3 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Mirko Norac
Thanks for your comments to the writer of the above article. I don't know if you saw the originator of the above article comments on finally having enough to do with the American version of what he now considers to be a corrupted article, but I think in all due respect intentionally or unintentionally you prove his point. Here it is less than a day that he's taken the article off of his watch list then you go and move the courtroom image of Norac down further on the page. At top is where it belongs so people can see what he looks like right away. Did that bother you or something? Finally, similar to the article's writer I'm letting it all go, and I'm not going to tell him how today's featured article on Wikipedia is about the tv show Lost, which pretty much matches what I'd told him in my second to last reply; wherefore, I'd said it's pretty sad when the plain truth was, was that good articles don't get GA status (Good Article), but stuff does like video games, tv shows and pop music. Yet, Lost one ups that a whole new level by getting a FA status (Featured Article). Nor, do I see a point in telling him about your choice of moving the image. Thanks again. Your Brother in Christ, DavidWJohnson 23:33, 3 October 2006 (UTC)
- If the addition to the Mirko Norac discussion page about his image for the article being moved was in referrence or in-part to me thank you for it. Your Brother in Christ, DavidWJohnson 00:35, 4 October 2006 (UTC)
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- Good article is given for the way an article is written and the information it contains. The topic does not matter. I am not your Brother in Christ. I made it pretty clear that you do not put a picture of someone in a courtroom first, a Christian should know this. The other picture shows him as a young hero, it is less point of view if we put the pictures chronologically and therefore the hero in the header, but already mention the war crimes there. The controversial opinions about this person are quite well presented this way. Personally I would prefer a neutral picture and will try to get one. Wandalstouring 16:02, 8 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Crossbow
I responded on my talk page. Beit Or 06:55, 19 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: need an expert
The most obvious one that comes to mind is Ghirlandajo; it's not exactly a topic that attracts many editors. ;-) Kirill Lokshin 19:13, 22 October 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's not the best of situations. Ghirlandajo clearly knows the material, even if he is highly confrontational over it; while we can bring in outside parties to try and cool the discussion, I doubt we'll be able to find any other editors with enough expertise in the actual topic to have a purely intellectual debate there. Kirill Lokshin 22:16, 22 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Citation for Potential blue water navies
Are you asking for citation for the term potential blue water navy or you are asking for citation for each navy in the list. If it is each Navy in the list then it is already provided. And if you are asking for citation for the term Potential blue water navy then there exists none, since the meaning of it is future blue water navies or the navies that are working to acheive the blue water status. Another important thing is that you asking for citation to be provided for U.S Navy to be called a blue water Navy. This seems unjustified since the whole world knows the U.S navy is a blue water navy. Also it is not the responsiblity of selected people to contribute to articles. If you wish to contribute to the article by finding and providing source, please do it rather than ask others to do it. Chanakyathegreat 16:58, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
No, there is no verification that the US navy is a blue water navy, so this is OR according to wikipedia standards.
I found the term potential blue water navy nowhere mentioned to describe a navy, so I want a source to show that this term is not OR of some wikipedians. Wandalstouring 17:07, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
I AM THE ONLY ONE WHO PROVIDED SOURCED COMMENTS. Wandalstouring 17:08, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
- Hey, Russia can have the largest submarine force in the world for all anyone cares. The problem is Russia's finances; the Russian Navy is nowhere near as active as the three currently listed. To try and draw similarities is a bit dangerous and unhelpful. Russia simply does not have the money to operate such a large navy; they have a huge navy that they can't use, in essence. Obviously I'm exaggerating by "can't use," but the main thrust is that the very size of Russia's military (generally, not just the navy) does not square well with Russia's financial resources.UberCryxic 18:24, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
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- This is OR as long as you give me no sources. I wrote an email to the Russian Navy and asked them for their opinion. Wandalstouring 18:29, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
Sources? For this? Gladly if you insist on it, but it's a pretty well-known fact. The Russians have had trouble maintaining the efficiency of their military forces after the fall of the Soviet Union. E-mailing the Russian Navy is unlikely to resolve the problem. A few months ago, another user was very dedicated to labeling the Spanish Navy a blue-water one. It would be like that user e-mailing the Spanish Navy and asking them for their opinion. I mean....they're probably going to say yes, but....so what?UberCryxic 18:44, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
- So they can be quoted here. If they lie to us, you can be sure, that every other military is going to rub them blue water ability in. Or do you want to suggest that the opinion of UberCryxic can be officially quoted on wikipedia?
- There are no sources so get them. Verifiability is missing. Wandalstouring 18:52, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
Most of my arguments for the current blue-water navy list revolve around this site: [1]. They don't explicitly categorize Russia anywhere, but they do label America, Britain, and France under the ranking, "Major Global Force Projection Navy," then proceed to highlight some of the differences.UberCryxic 19:29, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not keen on the globalsecurity site, not least because it's popup hell and my security software rings itself off the hook over it!
- Other than that a number of the articles are inaccurate, some of the material is dated 1994, some of the US systems names are out of date, and some of the UKUSA group stuff is wrong. It also seems to source quite a lot of the UK related material from conspiracy and alien-hunter sites who seem to think that we're hiding ours in a quarry in Wiltshire.
- I don't think it qualifies as reliable.ALR 19:45, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
For our purposes, it's been one of the most reliable and useful sites we have found.UberCryxic 21:17, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
- "Major Global Force Projection Navy" is not identical with blue water navy (unless you find a reliable source proving this without the help of Scully and Mulder). Sorry, but as ALR pointed out, this source does not qualify, otherwise we would have to state that there is a major naval Nazi power undermining the Antarctic continent and frequently bashing the US Navy (yes, such sources exist).Wandalstouring 22:28, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
I wasn't going to bother linking Brown and Green, I see a lot of value in just redirecting them once we've improve the Blue Water article. although it probably needs a name change afterwards.ALR 17:10, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
I will try to get it encyclopedic first, afterwards there is something to discuss resonably and it can be tossed around. Can you provide a link for EEZ and perhaps make the ref section with small fonts? Wandalstouring 17:16, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
- I'll take another look, I had something yesterday, I'm pretty sure it's in the doctrine publication, but I'll need to have another skim through it and I'm not at the client site until Thursday now.ALR 17:26, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
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- I regret to tell you that contemporary Russian navy issues are an area I know very little about...which perhaps is an irony because a family member of mine was a rear-admiral in the Russian Baltic Fleet under the last tsar.
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- I'd offer to research the issue for you, but judging from the depth of your remarks here, you are looking for esoteric knowledge on the subject which I probably couldn't find via internet searches.
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- Concerning current/recent Soviet/Russian military affairs, however, I have read a fair amount about the wars in Afghanistan and Chechnya.
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- Kenmore 18:28, 24 October 2006 (UTC)kenmore
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- Actually I'm just looking for a proclamation of the RN, like we can reach any shore with our aircraft carrier group within 3 month notice. Such statements are most likely made in Russian. Afterwards I can quote them. Wandalstouring 18:31, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Blue/Green/Brown Water Navies Cont'd
Hey Wandalstouring, Have been watching this huge Blue/Green/Brown water navy tiff with amusement due to the fact that my Navy, the Royal New Zealand Navy, could maybe be considered blue water (we send ships to the other side of the world) yet our deployable force is two rather under-armed frigates!! Saw your suggestion that they all be AfD'd, and insistance on definitions. Are you making any progress? HAve you found any def'ns better thah globalsecurity.org? Cheers Buckshot06 08:43, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
- I think we made some progress. Blue water navy is now based heavily on citations and there is a useable definition. This listing of the worlds blue water navies is a bit of a struggle, because some editors did not like my deleting of future blue water navies (+these intelligence reports on their plans) and turning it into examples rather than a complet listing. Whether the New Zealand Navy is blue water or not can be discussed. It also depends on the size of their enemies, but I think the forces they send around the world are roughly equals what the German Navy sends around the world (delivering a piece of concrete with graffiti on it from Berlin to South Africa) and they have been treatybound to stay a green water navy till 1984 without much progress since, so I wouldn't push it. Let's keep the big ones on the list. Wandalstouring 08:53, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Russian-Soviet Military History Task Force
Wandalstouring:
I would like to be part of the Russian-Soviet military history task force. I'm well read on the subject, particularly tsarist military affairs in the 19th century. See my articles on the 1812 battles of Polotsk II, Vyazma, Czasniki, and Smoliani. I did most of the Krasnoi article also, but had to suspend working on it due to a conflict with another editor. When that's resolved, Krasnoi will be a fine, in-depth analysis, including many footnotes, sources, and maps.
For more, see my contributions to the Krasnoi, Borodino, and French Invasion of Russia discussion pages.
Kenmore 18:06, 24 October 2006 (UTC)kenmore
[edit] Caspian Expeditions of the Rus
Thanks for the heads up! I'm not sure I'm as familiar with the topic as the two editors already on the job, but I'll have a look and see what I can do. I think I may start an article on the siege of Constantinople for starters. --Grimhelm 23:43, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
- They are not quite sure whether the article should be kept under that title. Maybe a merger with the siege for example could create Southern Expeditions of the Rus'. Have fun. Wandalstouring 06:48, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] RE:Reward page
Unfortunately not. And being a poor high skool student I have no money to offer. :( (And even if I did I think I'll keep it.) -- Миборовский 23:20, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Charles de Gaulle R91 - Straw Poll
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- There is a Straw Poll in the discussion page of the Charles de Gaulle aircraft carrier, can you kindly participate and if you have other persons who can provide an unbiased opinion that can help. Thanks a lot. Natobxl
Hey, actually there are no conflicting sources at all, or at least no one has given any so far. The real contention has been about how much, and how decisive, is what the current sources do claim about the event.UberCryxic 23:48, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
- Not to forget they do not agree upon what kind of operation this was. That is the central point. Wandalstouring 23:50, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
They all agree that it was a patrolling mission between French and American fighters. But you are right in the sense that some have used the word "interposition," others "reconaissaince." However, this can be worked out in the text of the article.UberCryxic 23:51, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
- A slight but important difference and where is your atlantique incident mentioned in these sources? Wandalstouring 23:53, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
Most don't mention it, but I wasn't the one who wrote the current version. I have some disagreements, but wasn't allowed to change anything (for understandable reasons - we were still in the middle of a dispute).UberCryxic 23:54, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
- So what the heck are you telling people? And then you want to remove the dispute tag in the middle of the dispute as you admit??? Wandalstouring 00:01, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
Well hang on. Many believe that at this point overwhelming evidence has been provided that this event actually happened. Whether it was an "interposition" mission or one of "reconaissaince" is a matter that can be sorted out in the text, but in light of these beliefs, I wanted to see where people stood on removing the disputed tag. What I'm telling people is this: the JED article, the most prestigious source we have so far, states that the commander of the Charles de Gaulle said that Rafale fighters had participated in a patrolling mission with American fighters, one that was not an exercise.UberCryxic 01:36, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
Hey again, I've found what I believe to be an excellent new source. See this, from the Bharat Rakshak Monitor, an Indian military and strategic online, peer-reviewed publication. The relevant quote goes as follows:
This fits with recent Pakistani reports [emphasis mine] that during June, French Rafale fighters and airborne control stations maintained combat air patrols across the probable path of fighters flying between Karachi and Mumbai – probably to stop surprise attacks on Indian nuclear facilities near Mumbai.
It appears, after all, that it was an interposition mission. The Liberation article was right.UberCryxic 03:01, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
You misssed an essential word: "probably" The point is we are unlikely to ever state for sure so we absolutely have to use a relativation. Wandalstouring 10:36, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
The "probable" in there speaks only about the presumed path of Pakistani fighters. The excerpt states, "absolutely," that the Rafales were actually conducting patrols, which is essentially all that matters from our perspective.UberCryxic 16:08, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
No, you are wrong, read again. There are is only one "probably" (I thought it self evident.) "probably to stop surprise attacks on Indian nuclear facilities near Mumbai." Understood that it is not clear whether these are patrols = OR. Wandalstouring 18:18, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
Yes I see now. My fault.UberCryxic 18:48, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] War of the Grand Alliance
What's wrong with the grammar and spelling of the article? Raymond Palmer 15:41, 28 October 2006 (UTC) I said it on the description that the footnotes are a problem. Wandalstouring 15:42, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
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- You put a tag to say the article is poor in grammar and spelling - it is not. If you have a problem with the footnotes, fair enough. But do not put a tag saying the article is grammatically poor at the top of the article. Raymond Palmer
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- It is a usual expression that the article needs copyediting and it is contained under style, as the citation style is needs major work. Save your breath and read. Wandalstouring 18:20, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
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Hey, what in particular about the footnotes is troubling? They seem fairly standardized to me. The style that Raymond used is fairly unorthodox I must admit, but as long as he's consistent with it, it will not trouble the reader.UberCryxic 00:54, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
That section could be a lot shorter. Wandalstouring 02:17, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
- By using the named ref tag trick (e.g.
<ref name="X"/>
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[edit] Re: African military history task force
Meh. Normally I'd like at least three comitted people before starting something off; on the other hand, this is a pretty obvious case. It's probably worthwhile leaving the discussion open for a bit; but, if nothing major changes, I'll probably just create the thing sometime tonight or tomorrow. Kirill Lokshin 22:11, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Peace bro
The three revert rule works both ways and anyone can call on an administrator. I will review your changes against other factual sources. However, you obviously don't know squat about horses, though your knowledge of medieval history may be somewhat better. Wikipedia asks that we assume good faith, so I will assume good faith on your part, but suggest that you consider the effect your aggressive tone has on others. Montanabw 21:56, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Per your comments on my talk page and within the war horse article, Please note that I only removed the fact template from two areas where I inserted a citation to a reference source that is, per wiki guidelines, acceptable if not perfect. Your other internal comments on War Horse may be well taken and are good suggestions for further research. And you were correct on the date of that armor photo, I make no argument that plate armor was worth a damn against a bullet or longbow, but they must have initially tried it for some reason other than just looks, but that discussion probably would be better placed in one of the articles on armor. Too bad commons doesn't have something better, if you find a good quality illustration or museum photo of something from the 14th century, feel free to add it, it would help.
- However, please note that I did NOT create the original article, much of the historic material was already there, I initially just did a bunch of moving around, cleaning up, and generally trying to stylistically whip it into shape. Some of the material that I personally added I am more than willing to look up some references on, the rest of it, like the Iranian cavalry reference (beats me if it's accurate, I didn't put it in there) well, those who care can look up the details and make any necessary corrections and citations, I only have so much time, unfortunately. The article sat around with the fact template in several sections for ages (I put one of those requests in there myself, actually) and no one seemed to care enough to provide any cites...sigh. As for the heavy horses that carried the knights, the modern Shire and other draft breeds are some of their descendants, though so too is the smaller Friesian horse (see Destrier article also). The details on height and weight will take some digging to unearth (I hope someone did skeleton studies, but who knows) and it's safe to presume that the 1800 lb, 18 hand Shire of today is bigger than its predecessor, but a 16 hand, 1200 pound modern Fresian or even a 15.2 Andalusian horse could still carry armor...and they are, even by modern standards, "large" horses that can be intimidating if not well-mannered. At any rate, if you have sources or citations to add, please add them, at least in the form of "some experts say X, but others say Y..." We all have multiple articles here we track, and my interests are more in the horsemanship and horse breeds articles than this one, so work on it has to go into the queue and wait its turn...I'll add what I can when I can. Montanabw 17:13, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: war horse
Oldwindybear might know something on the topic, but I can't think of any other (active) editor with a particular interest in that field. Kirill Lokshin 21:16, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
- OK guys, see this new article Horses in Warfare as a sandbox to completely rewrite War horse. I created an outline as a basis to start. I think rather than trying to rewrite the old article, let's just start a new one. Later on we can decide whether to keep the new article or boldly paste its contents into the old one. And please, be nice, my interest is in horses as well as cultural and political history. Your background seems to be military stuff. We can work together on this, I think, as long as there is an awareness that there are different perspectives that go into a piece like this. Montanabw 05:10, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
<< It is a difference for example if you train soldiers in an army emphasizing Mission-type tactics (US Marines are starting to use it increasingly) or Command and control used by US - and Sovjet forces. Mission type soldiers must be handeld differently, the instructor has to explain a lot what he does, etc. because the soldiers have responsibilities. Command and control means more doing what someone tells you no matter what. >>Wandalstouring 00:02, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
Oh, no argument there...likewise, you handle "hot-blooded" light horses quite a bit differently than "cold-blooded" draft or heavy horses. There is also an eternal debate in the horse training world between the "make the horse your partner" school of thought versus the "break their sprit and show 'em who's boss" school of thought--and that debate crosses all breeds and types. I'm just trying to figure out how all this fits into the war horse article, because these differences aren't so much related to the needs of military tactics as to the types of horses and the cultures that produced them...I mean a lot of what Xenophon was writing about was basically a plea to be nicer and less cruel to horses, then the knights used equipment on their lighter destriers that was so vicious-looking it would curl your toenails, only to have the nobility advocate training the very same type of animals with the gentlest methods 500 years later as Haute Ecole developed, and thus the debate is still not over. My question remains, what is it non-horse people are after here? Montanabw 00:24, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
<<Show different methods to prepare a horse for war. Perhaps make a difference between the lighter and heavier horses. I think the heavier types were more likely to face the killing in close quarters, as they were used by the heavy cavalry. It comes to my mind, that I heard the crusaders (heavy with lances) used stallions for their aggression, while the Muslims (light with bows) used mares which were easier to control. So it is perhaps more likely that the stallions faced crueler methods to prepare them for battle and control them in the fight, I assume. Wandalstouring 15:06, 10 November 2006 (UTC)>>
- It might be useful to discuss that yes, the crusaders often used stallions (stallions are aggressive, they can also be unpredictable and a pain in the ass, most armies probably used geldings for any real work), while the Muslims valued mares as war horses (Mares would stay quiet when on a raid, more loyal and trustworthy). Relative cruelty or brutality was more cultural than based on the sex of the horse. There IS a temperament difference between different breeds, probably worth noting. Problem is that there is both too much and not enough information on training...the best we can do is really broad generalities because to go into the differences between cultures and times would take several major treatises and the research is quite difficult to do unless you have access to a major university library. There is a problem with source materials. (Have you looked at that Kentucky Horse Park site I noted on the talk page? Maybe do so and see if that clarifies what my problem is in discussing "training.") Sort of like training dogs--yes you train a bird dog to do different things than a show dog or a guard dog or a hound taught to chase game on land. Where to even start, though? VERY complicated to explain! Montanabw 22:05, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Discussion is getting long for individual talk pages. Let's move it back to the Horse in Warfare talk page. I'm going to add a bit to the training section of the article in a bit. Some of the horse articles have good history and cultural stuff, others are total crap, it's real inconsistent. Your notion of putting things in general terms is probably the only workable solution. Montanabw 05:12, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] == Roman legion ==
You have been critizing the Roman legion article and mentioned battlefield deployments we have not yet shown. Are you interested in explaining to one of our graphic inclined editors how such a formation looked like, so we can create pictures of accurate examples. Thank you Wandalstouring 21:19, 4 November 2006 (UTC)
- Hi. I am more than happy to help out with this, yes. I am fairly new to wikipedia so not sure as to procedure on this though. The existing diagram is OK-ish but not really accurate or showing variations and detail. I am perfectly capable photoshop user myself if it is acceptable to draw up some images myself and upload them? Of more concern to me really is the equation of roman legion with roman army! Would defintiely like t see more comment on that from people. - PocklingtonDan 23:40, 4 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Commented on your user page, you mentioned more Roman formations, could you also make images of these. And perhaps give some examples of enemy formations (not just a black bar) to help the reader understand better the interaction. Wandalstouring 15:17, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks, I shall work on both the new images as suggested, and also revise the existing ones to show the misleading single block of enemy troops. - PocklingtonDan 17:16, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
- Commented on your user page, you mentioned more Roman formations, could you also make images of these. And perhaps give some examples of enemy formations (not just a black bar) to help the reader understand better the interaction. Wandalstouring 15:17, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: African military history task force
Hi Wandal,
What do you mean by "a template"? An entry in {{WPMILHIST}}? A userbox? Or something else?
Cheers,
Grafikm (AutoGRAF) 21:18, 6 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Way too much info
you put way too much detailed info into the Roman military article. Could you try to outsource it to other articles like: Military history of ancient Rome Wandalstouring 20:57, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
- I disagree - the history section is very small, and any other info put in, for example, the branches section is the minimum necessary to make sense of the terms and put them in context. I think the Roman military article serves an essential purpose to bring structure to the topic and any notes within it are purely to give it context and make it easier to understand. In my opinion it is pretty much pared down to the bare minimum - let's not forget this is a massive topic covering an entity with 1300 years existence and numerous reforms, and the article is scarcely longer than that for gladius for example. I seem to be ping-ponging at the moment between people telling me to split articles down into smaller articles and people telling me to merge smaller articles into larger ones. As far as I can tell the general agreement between me, yourself and others was to make the Romam military article an "extended disambiguation" page. The disambiguation necessarily entails some small amount of history - it doesn't make sense to mention two different types of army unit without putting into perspective that a reform led from one to the other. I agree that none of the history or detail should go very deep - that would be the job of a specialist page - but I do believe that it is the necessary glue that binds together the various terms and links used. I don't think any article can really be "too detailed" either - that seems a misnomer for an encycolpedia - it seems to me that if a section that briefly summarises a topic gives more information than a dedicated article on that topic, that the dedicated article is lacking and needs work, not that the summary needs to be pared down. I have in front of me on my desk just a few reference book from my colelction on Rome that together amount to over 6000 pages, which are themselves commentary and abbreviated versions of tens of thousands of pages of recorded data from archeology, contemporary sources etc - I really don't think that an article that is barely two pages of A4 on the Roman military can be said to be too detailed! :-) Of course, this is wikipedia, so if there is a consensus it needs to be pared down, or even if one individual is keen to pare it down, then it will happen. I would just always rather see too much information on a topic than too little. - PocklingtonDan 22:44, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
- I just wanted to point out in addition that in creating the Roman military article I followed the convention and precedent in setting covered areas and section titles and content of other military articles such as British military and US military. The ROman military section matches these closely and is in fact shorter despite covering a much larger stretch of history. Cheers - PocklingtonDan 22:52, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] "this is no reference"
Hi - Sorry, didn't understand your message "this is no reference" on my user talk page. Can you clarify please? Cheers - PocklingtonDan 17:57, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] "roman military" article
There's some good cited info on the article "Decline of the Roman Empire" that might be of use in the expenditure section of the roman military article to explain the difficulty in the late empire of funding the roman military - PocklingtonDan 18:51, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
- Wrong way, the expenditure section would very well tune in there. Wandalstouring 19:44, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] African Military History and Lists of Related Topics
Hi, I apologize if the TV show note seemed irrelevant. I have begun using the List of Uganda-related topics to make a red-link outline with tentative titles, including the Amin era. I will continue with the other countries as well; List of Angola-related topics, etc. Unfortunately I am not enough of scholar to go ahead and write these articles to full status. The work is under H:History of Uganda. --McTrixie 08:56, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] "Roman military system" - proposed changes
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I've proposed some changes on the discussion page of "Roman military system" given that its contents are currently a misnomer and do not match the title. Could you comment/vote on whether you approve of the proposed action on the talk page please? Cheers - PocklingtonDan 13:17, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Could you also please take a look at the same sort of problem on Military history of ancient Rome - I've started a thread on the talk page but basically the article content has nothing to do with the article title. If you were able to add your opinion on the proposed changes I would be grateful. Many Thanks, PocklingtonDan 13:39, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Converting lists
I think you are doing ill service by converting list into prose and destructuring the whole. try blockquotes and make the first word in fat print. That is a very old and widespread encyclopedic layout. Wandalstouring 17:48, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- hi wandalstouring, I think it is only fair to consider the immediate reactions to those who read and review the article. Whilst the bullet points displayed a clear and strong immediate layout to those of us with knowledge of the subject, every one of the three peer reviews stated that they found them confusing. I think that without explanation around them in prose form people were finding them hard to understand. I think perhaps we were assuming too much about an average reader's knowledge of the terms we were using, and a lot of it didn't make sense to people. I agreed with you initially about the bullet points (they are clearer to me) but it makes sense to write the articles so that they are clearest to the maximum number of people using them. Cheers - PocklingtonDan 17:55, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Wrong. None of them was confused by the layout with bullet points. It was considered against established rules.
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The Roman legion was almost entirely heavy infantry drawn exclusively from Roman citizens of any class. It was made up of Cohorts, which were further divided into Centuriae. Each legion had an associated Equites legionis, a body of Roman legionary cavalry.
The Roman auxilia was a formalisation of the earlier arrangement of using allied troops from the Socii and Latini who had received Roman citizenship after the Social War.
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- Now it is much less clearer. Cheers. None of the peer reviews complained that bullleted lists make it not clear to anybody. It was about established FA rules saying it has to be in prose. As I already answered you, you could do it very differently (read again the suggestion of Kirill Lokshin) and kept a clear structure while using lots of prose to explain things even to the lowest bidder. Think first, edit later. Wandalstouring 18:28, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Hi Wandalstouring. I don't think this is something to get upset about. I thought it was very clear from the peer reviews that all three reviewers to date commented that they thought that prose would be better than bulleted lists. Expanding to full prose has made things less clear to someone familiar with the terms who is scanning the article (you and me) but much clearer to someone unfamiliar with the terms who is reading it through from start to finish (the reviewers and general readership). I did think first and edit later - I called a peer review, listened to their responses, posted what I was gong to do in response to their reviews, and then did it. I can't think of a more thorough or transparent process than what I did. PocklingtonDan 18:41, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- No, I pointed out, you didn't use all input. Prose is not a layout style. The bulleted lists were a layout style, the ellipsis were a writing style. Now you changed the writing style, OK. You also changed the layout and now it is non-functional. That is the point. There was a suggestion considering how to turn the writing style into prose and keep the layout easy to scan. That's the trick with blockquotes. Wandalstouring 18:50, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Hi Wandalstouring. I don't think this is something to get upset about. I thought it was very clear from the peer reviews that all three reviewers to date commented that they thought that prose would be better than bulleted lists. Expanding to full prose has made things less clear to someone familiar with the terms who is scanning the article (you and me) but much clearer to someone unfamiliar with the terms who is reading it through from start to finish (the reviewers and general readership). I did think first and edit later - I called a peer review, listened to their responses, posted what I was gong to do in response to their reviews, and then did it. I can't think of a more thorough or transparent process than what I did. PocklingtonDan 18:41, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Now it is much less clearer. Cheers. None of the peer reviews complained that bullleted lists make it not clear to anybody. It was about established FA rules saying it has to be in prose. As I already answered you, you could do it very differently (read again the suggestion of Kirill Lokshin) and kept a clear structure while using lots of prose to explain things even to the lowest bidder. Think first, edit later. Wandalstouring 18:28, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Major error
This diagram is wrong from the point you branch of the Eastern Roman Empire (and none in the peer review realized this factual error). At the moment the Eastern Empire branched of the military was divided in half. In your diagram the Eastern Empire started with a few hundred men and rapidly expanded to hundred thousands (thanks to which series of military geniuses?). Wandalstouring 17:54, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- I understand what you are saying - can you give me a quick sketch of how you think this can be better represented? Cheers - PocklingtonDan 17:57, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- At the time the Eastern Empire branches out, divide the number of military personal in half and give each one half of the troops, so the graph of the lila area has a sudden discontinuous decline. Wandalstouring 18:07, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- can you just draw me a really quick sketch, no matter how rudimentary, to demonstrate what you mean please? Chers - PocklingtonDan 18:43, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- At the time the Eastern Empire branches out, divide the number of military personal in half and give each one half of the troops, so the graph of the lila area has a sudden discontinuous decline. Wandalstouring 18:07, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Tagging articles
Any article related to this task force should be marked by adding African-task-force=yes to the {{WPMILHIST}} project banner at the top of its talk page (see the project banner instructions for more details on the exact syntax). This will automatically place it into Category:African military history task force articles. Greatings Wandalstouring 23:59, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re:African Military history task force
Very interesting. But I think I have an interest more in modern or ongoing conflicts, especially the Central African War. íslenskur fellibylur #12 (samtal) 01:18, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Musket imagery
Sorry for the delay, didn't immidiately respond and forgot. I can provide raster images of the side of the weapons, would be nice if someone could turn them into unilingual SVGs. Drop me a mail with the address where I should send them. Scoo 07:20, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Crossbow
I'm surprised I never though of just putting 'faster shooting'. I sat and did a find/replace for 'fire/fired' 'shoot/shot', but then found that it left over 'before the dawn of shootarms' and 'rate of shoot'. So, I sat and agonised for a bit, and decided that 'rate of fire' couldn't be too bad. Hehe. But how did the article sit for so long, pontificating about 'firing'. The Crying Orc 11:43, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
Some time ago I had corectected all firing, but it seems new edits brought it in again. People can think of nothing but firing a weapon. Hopefully the next step is not:"The Romans fired their pila before engaging in close combat." Wandalstouring 19:46, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] A-Class reviews
A quick note: I usually find it more productive to put up a reminder note halfway through the four-day review period; doing it so soon after the review is put up may not be the best time for it. ;-) Kirill Lokshin 02:30, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
- If this is the case make it part of the A-class review description. It is advised to do... Wandalstouring 02:32, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
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I'd place them below the infobox, rather than on top of it; but that may just be personal preference. ;-) Kirill Lokshin 05:49, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- We have not yet a guideline. Usually I place it under the infobox, but in some cases in thought it better on top. Could you change the background of the header to blue? Would look way better. Wandalstouring 05:51, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Crossbow Rewrite
Could you please help me finish my plan for the main crossbow article? Mostly the types of crossbow section needs work. cyclosarin 04:09, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
- Your way to start a new article is a bit odd. I didn't notice you wanted to do it so private. Yes, I will take a look, but wouldn't it be a better idea to shift your suggestion to the talk page of the concerning article so other editors may also join? Wandalstouring 08:22, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
- Sorry I wasn't sure what else to do. The plan is based on the main article and the suggestions discussed on the talk page with a link on the talk page and I wanted to transfer the content from the main article and possibly some extra in order to make it usable before maybe adding it to the main article to be further edited. cyclosarin 14:23, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Moving requests
I'd suggest just adding the links to the requested articles directly to the task force's open task template, rather than putting them on the task page; that just adds more work, as someone now has to move the request again. Kirill Lokshin 13:24, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- I didn't want to put this directly on the to do list of task forces I wasn't member. So I left it to the task forces how to proceed. Wandalstouring 13:27, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Task force membership is entirely an informal thing; in any case, you're a coordinator—it's part of your job to do organizational things like that. ;-) Kirill Lokshin 13:32, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Wasn't mention in my job description. Still, I consider it more invasive to put things on someones to do list (task forces are groups of shared interest) than making it as a proposal on the talk page. Wandalstouring 13:35, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Bleh. If you don't add them to the to-do list, chances are nobody will; as I've said, people assume that the coordinators will take care of such things. (And I haven't seen anybody else—task force member or not—making "proposals" before adding items to the to-do list.) At this point, the approach is just adding more work for everyone involved; so please feel free to add things to the task templates directly. :-) Kirill Lokshin 13:39, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- What do coordinators do needs some expansion. :P But honestly if nobody does the task force doesn't work. Wandalstouring 13:41, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Heh. Well, in any case, I've taken care of adding things to the templates for the time being. Kirill Lokshin 14:05, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- What do coordinators do needs some expansion. :P But honestly if nobody does the task force doesn't work. Wandalstouring 13:41, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Bleh. If you don't add them to the to-do list, chances are nobody will; as I've said, people assume that the coordinators will take care of such things. (And I haven't seen anybody else—task force member or not—making "proposals" before adding items to the to-do list.) At this point, the approach is just adding more work for everyone involved; so please feel free to add things to the task templates directly. :-) Kirill Lokshin 13:39, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Wasn't mention in my job description. Still, I consider it more invasive to put things on someones to do list (task forces are groups of shared interest) than making it as a proposal on the talk page. Wandalstouring 13:35, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Task force membership is entirely an informal thing; in any case, you're a coordinator—it's part of your job to do organizational things like that. ;-) Kirill Lokshin 13:32, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: manually created template of task force list
Yep, what you put together worked quite well! (It just wasn't the best solution in the long run, I think. ;-) Kirill Lokshin 14:10, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Viewers' evaluation
It's an idea that's been brought up many times in various forms (see, for example, m:Article validation); the basic issue is that something like that can't really be done (in a halfway-decent manner) through simple templates, but would require actual changes to the software to support reading forms from viewers and putting the results somewhere meaningful—and that's not something the developers seem to want to do, or have time for, at the moment. (The approach is, of course, quite controversial; many people—myself included—think that the signal-to-noise ratio of comments from random readers would make them pretty useless, as the average reader, even if not merely a juvenile vandal entering nonsense, would likely know very little about the topic of an arbitrarily chosen article, and would thus be able to provide superficial comments, at best.) Kirill Lokshin 18:07, 9 December 2006 (UTC)
- That's a point of view I don't share. I encountered several anonymous editors in recent times who did know their subject. But well, the technical difficulties are an issue. Talking about such things to our developers is pretty pointless for they do whatever they want. Let's leave it at this until I surprise you with the finished product ;) Wandalstouring 20:11, 9 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Creating maps
Sure, I'd be glad to help any way I can. Albrecht 01:22, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
Although I would love to participate 100%, I'm currently incapable to render such a level of commitment. I can though stick my head in this for the comment now and again, including for some suggestions or basic knowledge. Varana and Bigdaddy1204 have both been producing maps on the Byzantine articles and could be assets to the new moot. Thanks for having considered me Wandalstouring. :o)--Dryzen 17:06, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Roman-Spartan War
What bits should I cut? Kyriakos 02:24, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
- I cut it. basically the new section you inserted wasn't that useful in my opinion. Wandalstouring 02:43, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
- Ok. What else do you think needs to be done? Kyriakos 02:52, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
- Rewording the whole article to read smoothly. Wandalstouring 02:57, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
- Ok. What else do you think needs to be done? Kyriakos 02:52, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Wargames and Co.
An interesting idea; but I'm not entirely sure how you would go about actually creating a usable map from a wargame. If you're just drawing the map yourself based on what you observe, you're still left with the dependence on personal drawing ability; and trying anything photographic is going to be somewhat problematic.
(Beyond that, I would tend to prefer maps based on narratives in actual historical works to maps based on wargames. A game must necessarily select a single version of events to follow, while a historian may very well present multiple versions where the true course of events is unknown.) Kirill Lokshin 03:21, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
- OK, I will work on this. Let's see the results. A wargame seen from a bird's eye view is the same as a map. Naturally you can use different setups for different versions of the same event, but that also doesn't differ from the use of different maps (some of our battles have only one map version from the US military which doesn't always show an undisputed interpretation of events). The next step would be to indicate the troop movements with colorful arrows printed on the photo (something I have seen in wargame images before).Wandalstouring 03:30, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] New Task Force
I was wonderind if you could help me. I am interested in creating a new task force, in section : nations and regions, a section relating to Ukrainian military history. I am not sure if I can just add, I wanted to ask first. Thanks.--Hillock65 06:33, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Josef Meisinger - translation
Josef Albert Meisinger (* 14. September 1899 in München; † 7. März 1947 in Warschau hingerichtet) war ein deutscher Oberst der Polizei, SS-Standartenführer und Kriegsverbrecher.
Josef Albert Meisinger (* 14th September 1899 in Munich; † 7th March 1947 executed in Warsaw) was a German police colonel, SS-Standartenführer and convicted war criminal.
Der Sohn von Josef Meisinger und seiner Ehefrau Berta Volk besuchte vier Klassen der Volksschule in München, um dann dort das Luitpoldgymnasium und Realgymnasium zu absolvieren. Am 23. Dezember 1916 meldet er sich als Kriegsfreiwilliger bei einem Minenwerfer-Ersatzbataillon. An die Westfront rückt er am 17. Juli 1917 aus, um dort im Reserve-Infanterie Regiment 30 und in der Minenwerferkompanie 230 eingesetzt zu werden.
The son of Josef Meisinger and his wife Berta Volk visited elementary school in Munich for four years before graduating from the Luitpold Gymnasium and Realgymnasium. On 23th December 1916 he voluntered for war service in a Mine launcher-reserve bataillon. He was deployed to the Western Front on 17th Juli 1917 and saw service in the reserve-infantry regiment 30 and the mine launcher company 230.
Mit einer schweren Verwundung zu 30 Prozent kriegsbeschädigt wird er mit dem Dienstgrad eines Vizefeldwebels am 18. Januar 1919 aus dem Heeresdienst entlassen. Als Auszeichnungen im Weltkrieg erhielt er das Eiserne Kreuz II. Klasse und das Bayrische Militärverdienstkreuz. In das Freikorps Epp wird er am 19. April 1919 aufgenommen.
With a heavy injury and ranked 30% disabled he was released from army service on 18th January 1919 with the rank of a Vizefeldwebel. He was decorated in the First World War with the Iron Cross Second Class and the Bavarian Cross of War Merit. He affiliated with the Freikorps Epp in 19th April 1919.
Von Juli 1919 bis zum 30. September 1920 ist er bei der Bayrischen Handelsbank beschäftigt. An den Ruhrkämpfen beteiligt er sich als Freiwilliger bei der Reichswehr vom 13. März bis 20. April 1920. Als Inspizient beim Landgericht München II ist er vom 1. Oktober 1920 bis zum 30. September 1922 angestellt. Zur Polizeidirektion München wird er am 1. Oktober 1922 versetzt. Als Führer des 3. Zuges der 2. Kompanie des Freikorps Oberland beteiligt er sich am 8.-9. November 1923 am Hitlerputsch.
Als SS-Anwärter tritt er am 5. März 1933 in die SS (Nr. 36 134) ein. In die Bayrische Politische Polizei (BayPoPo) wird er am 9. März 1933 versetzt und kommt somit mit Reinhard Heydrich in dienstliche Verbindung. Mitglied der NSDAP (Mitglied-Nr. 3 201 697) wird er am 1. Mai 1933. Zum SS-Truppführer wird er am 28. Juni 1933 befördert. Den Blutorden der NSDAP (Nr. 374) erhielt er am 9. November 1933. Mit Martha Zirngibl (geboren am 16. August 1904 in Fürth) geht er am 3. April 1934 die Ehe ein.
Die Beförderung zum SS-Obertruppführer erfolgt am 20. April 1934. Als Heydrich nach Berlin geht, nimmt er von der BayPoPo seine vertrauten Mitarbeiter mit: Heinrich Müller, Franz Josef Huber und Josef Meisinger, auch "Bajuwaren-Brigade" genannt. Somit wechselt Meisinger am 1. Mai 1934 zum Geheimen Staatspolizeiamt (Gestapa) nach Berlin, um am gleichen Tag zum Kriminalrat ernannt zu werden. Er übernimmt dort die Leitung des Dezernats II 1 H und II H 1 (NSDAP, Abtreibungen, §175 und Rassenschande). Dieses Dezernat hatte folgende Aufgaben:
- Aufdeckung von Gegnern von Adolf Hitler innerhalb der NSDAP
- Verfolgung von Homosexuellen
- Verfolgung von Fällen der Abtreibung und der Verfolgung von Verstößen gegen das Verbot intimer Beziehungen von Juden zu Nicht-Juden
Die Beförderung zum SS-Untersturmführer vom 9. Mai 1934 tritt mit Wirkung vom 1. Mai 1934 ein. Am 24. Juni 1934 hat er den Auftrag, den Führer der Katholischen Aktion Erich Klausener auf dem Katholikentag in Berlin zu observieren. Er meldet Heydrich, daß Klausener "staatsfeindliche Äußerungen" von sich gegeben hätte, worauf Klausener von Heydrich auf eine Todesliste von NS-Gegnern gesetzt wird und später von einem SS-Mann am 30. Juni 1934 vor seinem Büro erschossen wurde.
1935 übernimmt Meisinger auch die Leitung des Sonderdezernats II S " Bekämpfung der Homosexualität und Abtreibung"(1). Am 16. Dezember 1935 erhält er als Anerkennung den Julleuchter der SS. Ab 1936 übernimmt Meisinger als Leiter die Referate PP II H (Angelegenheiten der NSDAP, ihrer Gliederungen und angeschlossenen Verbände) und PP II S (Bekämpfung der Homosexualität und der Abtreibung) im Hauptamt der Sicherheitspolizei. Am 23. April 1936 erfolgt die Beförderung zum SS-Sturmbannführer mit Wirkung vom 20. April 1936.
Von 1936 bis 1938 führt Meisinger als Leiter die "Reichszentrale zur Bekämpfung der Homosexualität und Abtreibung" im Gestapa. Zum SS-Obersturmbannführer wird Meisinger am 30. Januar 1937 befördert. Im gleichen Jahr wird er zum Regierungsrat ernannt. Als der Oberbefehlshaber des Heeres Werner von Fritsch im Juli 1936 in Ermittlungen über einen Fall von Homosexualität verstrickt wird, gehört dieser Fall in den Zuständigkeitsbereich von Meisinger. Hauptbelastungszeuge ist ein Otto Schmidt, der in Unterweltkreisen verkehrt. Meisinger leitet die Vernehmungen von Schmidt. Hier sieht Meisinger seine große Stunde gekommen, da er doch weiß, wie Heinrich Himmler und die SS die Homosexualität als Gefahr für das NS-Regime betrachten.
Dabei wird Meisinger von seinen Vorgesetzten schlecht beurteilt. Heydrich bezeichnet ihn als "Widerling", Heinrich Müller beschwerte sich über ihn andauernd und Werner Best beurteilte ihn als einen primitiven Mann mit brutalen Methoden(2, S. 95). Bei den Verhören unterlaufen Meisinger einfache polizeiliche Fehler, als er z.B. dem Belastungszeugen, einem notorischen Lügner, Photos von Fritsch zur Identifizierung zeigt, wobei dieser aus der Beschriftung der Photos Daten entnehmen kann, die er in seine Behauptungen dann einpflechtet. Als Meisinger dann in seiner Selbstüberheblichkeit die Bewertung der Ermittlungsakte seinen unmittelbaren Vorgesetzten vorenthält, diese direkt Himmler überreicht und dieser die Akte sogleich Hitler vorlegt, ist quasi seine Laufbahn im Gestapa beendet. Denn vor Gericht brechen die Beschuldigungen gegen Fritsch, der einer Verwechslung zum Opfer fiel, in sich zusammen. Dabei hatten alle anderen Ermittlungen keine Belastungsmomente gezeigt. Meisinger war z.B. mit Kriminalkommissar Eberhard Schiele nach Ägypten gereist, um zu ermitteln, ob Fritsch dort während seines Urlaubs November/Dezember 1937 homosexuelle Kontakte gehabt hätte(2, S. 160), was aber nicht nachgewiesen werden konnte.
Als Folge des Versagens von Meisinger und seiner Dienststelle werden er und andere abgelöst, strafversetzt oder entlassen. Von 1938 bis 1939 wird er zum Archiv des SD-Hauptamtes versetzt, um dann von September 1939 Stellvertreter des Kommandeurs der SD-Einsatzgruppe IV in Polen zu werden. Vom 23. Oktober 1939 bis zum 1. März 1941 bekleidet er den Posten des Kommandeurs der Sicherheitspolizei und des SD im Distrikt Warschau. Am 1. Januar 1940 ernennt man ihn zum SS-Standartenführer.
Meisinger trat die Nachfolge von Lothar Beutel an, der wegen Korruption abgelöst wurde. Meisinger ging mit aller Gewalt gegen Polen und Juden vor. So ließ er im Wald von Palmyra Massenerschießungen an 1 700 Menschen durchführen(3). Heydrich hatte die diesbezüglichen Anweisungen im Juli 1940 als "außerordentlich radikal" bezeichnet(ebenda). Meinsinger wurde so berüchtigt, daß man ihn den "Schlächter von Warschau" nannte.
Im März 1941 ist er kurzzeitig im Reichssicherheitshauptamt tätig, um dann vom 1. April 1941 bis Mai 1945 als Polizeiverbindungsführer und Sonderbeauftragter des SD an der deutschen Botschaft in Tokio tätig zu werden. Weiterhin ist er Verbindungsoffizier des SD zum japanischen Geheimdienst. Vor allem die weitere Judenverfolgung ist dort seine Aufgabe. So kommt es von ihm 1941 zu einer kuriosen Intervention bei den japanischen Dienststellen, als er diese auffordert, Juden im von den Japanern besetzten Shanghai zu verfolgen. Da aber den Japanern der Antisemitismus fremd ist, kommt es nur dazu, daß die Juden in einem Bezirk Shanghais zusammenziehen müssen. Es erfolgen aber keine weiteren Zwangsmaßnahmen von seiten der Japaner.
Am 25. Januar 1943 wird er zum Oberst der Polizei ernannt. US-amerikanische Dienststellen verhaften ihn am 6. September 1945 in Yokohama, um ihn 1946 an polnische Behörden auszuliefern. Am 17. Dezember 1946 wird er mit Ludwig Fischer und Max Daume in Warschau wegen Kriegsverbrechen angeklagt. Der Oberste Volksgerichtshof in Warschau verurteilt Meisinger am 3. März 1947 zum Tode, worauf er am 7. März 1947 im Warschauer Mokotów-Gefängnis durch den Strang hingerichtet wird.
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- (2) Karl-Heinz Janßen, Fritz Tobias, Der Sturz der Generäle - Hitler und die Blomberg-Fritsch-Krise 1938, München 1994, ISBN 340638109X
- (3) Michael Wildt, Generation des Unbedingten - Das Führerkorps des Reichsischerheitshauptamtes, Hamburg 2003, ISBN 3930908875 S. 478
- History of the United Nations War Crimes Commission and the Development of the Laws of War p. 532, United Nations War Crimes Commission, London: HMSO, 1948
- Dienstaltersliste der Schutzstaffel der NSDAP vom 9. November 1944
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- (1) [2] - Schaubild der Aufgliederung des Geheimen Staatspolizei Amts(Gestapa)
[edit] Re:Wargames
In theory it sounds nice, in practice we will have to see it. First problem I see is that most wargames with miniatures are fantasy (or worse, sci-fi) - not really historical (WWII with Axis & Allies is probably the best exception we have). Second problem - we need somebody with minis, and even worse, the maps will be a pain. All things considered, I think it's an idea worth pursuing, but it will likely be very difficult before we see the results. Alas, this is what people thought about the entire Wikipedia project in 2000, most likely :) PS. I have no terrain battlegrounds nor any historical minis :( -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus | talk 00:22, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Wargaming
I specialize in the American Civil War, and, luckily, we have a talented mapmaker for that genre (User:Hlj). He is slowing creating great maps for the major ACW battles. I agree that maps are very useful for Wiki articles, and am intrigued by your ideas for wargames from a bird's eye view. We took a lot of these kinds of shots for my Gettysburg and Antietam wargaming books to help illustrate how to translate from the terrain maps to the tabletop, although we did not add troop movements. Great concept if done right... Scott Mingus 01:31, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Wargames
Thank you for the proposal, Wandalstouring! It seems like a good idea, and quite innovative, and I would like to see the results. However, I regret that, similar to Piotrus, I do not have miniatures painted in sufficient numbers for what is being suggested. I can see this being very effective for American Civil War era, and fortunately Scott Mingus seems to have the means to help out. I have a feeling Larry Dunn may be able to help with pike and shot era wargame maps, and you don't appear to have asked him yet. Sorry I could not be of much help myself. --Grimhelm 12:27, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] And again
I'll tack in here as the topic already exists. I don't really know too much about the tabletop wargaming in the professional sense, about all I can really say is that they used the standard NATO symbology for units and tended to be at the Operational level rather than the tactical which classic wargamers use. Rockdrill on the other hand is a bit more tactically oriented and is still used as part of mission rehearsal, but I couldn't give you reliable sources for any of that. I'm afraid I cant really help much, the demonstrations we had of classic battles in training was abouut my only exposure pre-computers.ALR 07:56, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
Incidentally, have a good Christmas.ALR 07:57, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] White Phosphorus
Edit away! I have no dog in tis fight. I have used WP of course, but suspect it was not I who made such crazed comments about the stuff. Warm regards, Paul, in Saudi 10:43, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: some issues
I wasn't aware that the Maps WikiProject was at all active, actually; last I had heard, it was pretty catatonic.
As far as getting templates into the MoS: they generally don't, unless they're extremely widespread and enjoy global consensus. A template that's a few weeks old and used on less than a thousand articles simply isn't going to make it in. (Indeed, trying to push the issue at this point is a horrendously bad idea, as now everyone will suddenly have an opinion on said template, and will try to make... adjustments—possibly by trying to get the thing deleted. It would have been much easier to simply let the template be adopted virally across Wikipedia, and perhaps make a note of it in the MoS once it becomes generally accepted.) Kirill Lokshin 01:54, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Featured lists
Interesting stuff. We haven't really done much with featured lists; the only one in our area (Battles of the Mexican-American War) is quite old. I'm not sure if we'll be able to templatize the tables, as each list will need a different layout, depending on what it's presenting; but there are certainly some things that might be looked at as far as a more sophisticated layout is concerned. (A lot of our lists tend to be quite crude, at this point.) Kirill Lokshin 16:21, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
- hi wandals, thanks for the message. i'm definitely going to be mostly absent from wikipedia until early january now, only checking in briefly once a day at the moment to check for any vandalism on watched pages. I think simply formatting a lot of the list articles into wikitables with summaries as in the example would be a great idea and a good step forward presentationally. Let me know the outcome of the discussion with Kirrill but i'd be happy to work through the military of rome improving the list articles on that basis. Cheers - PocklingtonDan 21:33, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: admin stuff
Just list it on WP:RFPP. I'm not sure (a) that the situation is dire enough to warrant protection or (b) that this will be interpreted as anything other than a content dispute (likely leading to full protection), though. Kirill Lokshin 22:13, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Crossbow
I removed it from WP:GAC per your request. The article certainly does look good, and it doesn't have that far to go to be a GA. Have a great day. -- Kicking222 19:38, 25 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Roman-Spartan War
Hi Wandal, seeing as you were invovled with the article, I just wanted to let you know that I nominated the article for FA if you would like to go and leave a comment. Kyriakos 07:25, 26 December 2006 (UTC)
You claqimed on the articles FA that the article is unstable. Some people are asking why it is unstable. Can you please answer them when you have time. :) Kyriakos 22:51, 26 December 2006 (UTC)
Holleaux claims that Flaminius ingeniously placed the Union under Achean protection but it was not a member. Kyriakos 21:32, 28 December 2006 (UTC)
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[edit] Fact request on Hannibal article
I sourced the statement you said needed fact checking. Also, if you feel the need to do so, please feel free to go ahead and tag other statements in the Hannibal article for fact checking. I'd be happy to look for sources, as I have been heavily focusing on this article in the past few days. Thanks. Aaрон Кинни (t) 08:10, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
- OK thank you. I will also make some comments on the discussion page. Wandalstouring 12:39, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Category:Military brat
Well, somebody beat me to the category of military brat, but I went through last night and updated all of the brats on the List of famous military brats to have the category on their page. Well, the category has already been nominated for deletion. The reasoning is because it is a "non-neutral" term and parental occupation is irrelevant. Thus, I'm letting people who have contributed to the Military brat article know so that they can support the category. Here is the link to the discussion [3] Balloonman 20:29, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Social reforms and the Title of Nabis
I'll start off with the reforms. Nabis started liberating helots in the fashion of former Spartans Kings like Agis IV and Cleomenes III. Once free they could join the army as hoplite and Nabis even gave some of them the wives lands of so people he exiled.
Now about Nabis' title: Nabis called himself King and put it on his coins. But outside his territories it was different. The Achean League, Rome, the Aetolian League and other classical historians consider him a tyrant becuase the overthrew the rightful king and as propoganda against him. In modern times most people call him a tyrant. For example look at Wiki's article on Nabis.
I hope this helped. Kyriakos 22:29, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
I re wrote the Aftermath section can you please tell me what you think. Kyriakos 01:14, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
- I reworded some parts. Check for conflicts with the cites. Wandalstouring 15:08, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
Do you think it looks better now? Kyriakos 21:21, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
- Better, but not yet finished. Wandalstouring 22:57, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
Do you think I should re-write any sections? Kyriakos 23:25, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] crossbow
I hope you just read a little about gastraphetes,which give a definition of gastraphetes is a catapult not a crossbow even it ressembles crossbow.And I had add anythings new in the article,If I was a prochinese editor,I will remove the phraseMost probably, the crossbow first appeared at an unknown date among the tribes of South-Eastern Asia,and take care of your reversion you risk of breaking the Wikipedia:Three-revert rule.--Ksyrie 19:43, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- That is plain vandalism. This statement is sourced word for word. Wandalstouring 19:53, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- I have noticed that you have changed the definition of gastraphetes from catapult to crossbow.As far as I know,catapult is a Projectile weapon,and crossbow is a bow.It's very clear there are some differences between the two kinds of weapon.--Ksyrie 19:57, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- And what is a bowgun? If you check the gastraphetes article you will essentially notice that I sourced it. that is the relevant point. PS: the bow gun possibly did appear first in China during the Warring States period. Wandalstouring 19:59, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- Right,maybe you are right,and to be objective,I wish you can move the party of
- And what is a bowgun? If you check the gastraphetes article you will essentially notice that I sourced it. that is the relevant point. PS: the bow gun possibly did appear first in China during the Warring States period. Wandalstouring 19:59, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- I have noticed that you have changed the definition of gastraphetes from catapult to crossbow.As far as I know,catapult is a Projectile weapon,and crossbow is a bow.It's very clear there are some differences between the two kinds of weapon.--Ksyrie 19:57, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
gastraphetes in the history of catapult.As you know there are also the same gastraphetes in achient china,we call it catapult instead of crossbow.If you would like to change the definition,maybe all the ones should be changed.--Ksyrie 20:07, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
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- OK, first gastraphetes are handheld and shoot arrows. Oxybeles are larger and were used to shoot bigger projectiles. But essentially any crossbow can shoot projectiles if you change the single sinew of an arrow/bolt shooter for the double sinew of a stone shooter. A catapult is defined by being larger and used against walls during sieges, so the attribut handheld already excludes catapult. See also "Chinese Siege Warfare: Mechanical Artillery & Siege Weapons of Antiquity" by Liang Jieming, ISBN 981-05-5380-3 Wandalstouring 20:13, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks your definition,if gastraphetes are handheld, it cannt be the larger catapult,ok? Please take pains to remove the party of gastraphetes in catapult,I dont' want someone see me as a prochinese.--Ksyrie 20:18, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- It isn't about pro or contra Chinese, everybody has a POV and we try to sort things out. Wandalstouring 20:23, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks your definition,if gastraphetes are handheld, it cannt be the larger catapult,ok? Please take pains to remove the party of gastraphetes in catapult,I dont' want someone see me as a prochinese.--Ksyrie 20:18, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
- OK, first gastraphetes are handheld and shoot arrows. Oxybeles are larger and were used to shoot bigger projectiles. But essentially any crossbow can shoot projectiles if you change the single sinew of an arrow/bolt shooter for the double sinew of a stone shooter. A catapult is defined by being larger and used against walls during sieges, so the attribut handheld already excludes catapult. See also "Chinese Siege Warfare: Mechanical Artillery & Siege Weapons of Antiquity" by Liang Jieming, ISBN 981-05-5380-3 Wandalstouring 20:13, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] Barnstar
The Epic Barnstar | ||
Thank you for all your hard work helping re-write and improve the Roman-Spartan War for this I present to you the Epic Barnstar!Kyriakos 21:19, 7 January 2007 (UTC) |
What more do you think the article needs? Kyriakos 20:44, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
I'll check. Kyriakos 20:46, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
- Some more work on the language and essentially there was a section about the events leading to this war. the Acheans arguing the unwilling Romans to take up arms etc. It disappeared, perhaps you can reestablish it, it is central to understanding the article. A possible error is in the section about the Iron Maiden. It wasn't clear in the original version if the gentry was threatened with this device to pay the demanded sum or whether they refused first and then were surprisingly killed with this device. Wandalstouring 20:49, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
From what I have read the gentry weren't threatened but it is more than likely. Kyriakos 20:54, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
- The point is were they killed or threatened. Wandalstouring 22:00, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
I got this passage from Smith: "One of his engines of torture resembled the maiden of more recent times: it was a figure resembling his wife Apega, so constructed as to clasp the victim and pierce him to death with the nails with which the arms and bosom of the figure were studded."Kyriakos
On what occasions was this engine used? and what is the primary source of Smith? Wandalstouring 23:01, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
Smith's primary source is Polybius. Here is the whole passage: "All persons possessed of property who remained at Sparta were subjected to incessant exactions, and the most cruel tortures if they did not succeed in satisfying his rapacity. One of his engines of torture resembled the maiden of more recent times: it was a figure resembling his wife Apega, so constructed as to clasp the victim and pierce him to death with the nails with which the arms and bosom of the figure were studded. (Polyb. xiii. 7.)"
OK, that is clear now, but this doesn't refer to the assembly of the gentry in any way. Wandalstouring 23:35, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
What do you think of the maps added to the article? Kyriakos 02:24, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- Show them to the guys at the Wikiproject map link is in the Request departement. Wandalstouring 02:28, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
Do you think the article will pass GAC? And what else needs to be done? Kyriakos 04:33, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
I'm thinking of making the infomantion about the rulers of Sparta before Nabis into a note. What do you think? Kyriakos 00:08, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
- OKWandalstouring 00:09, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for your advice. I start fixing what I can once I finish with the article on Gythium. Kyriakos 00:13, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
I've done what I can but I can't find out about the Spartan army of the time. Kyriakos 03:01, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Military of Carthage
Ah, ok. "Punic military" would probably work (although it seems vaguely off, gramatically; maybe something like "Punic military establishment). Alternately, something like "Military of the Carthaginian (Punic?) Empire" might be suitable. (I'm not convinced that "Military of Carthage" is that big a deal, either; primary disambiguation is usually assumed in page titles, which is why we can have things like "Siege of Paris" rather than "Siege of Paris, France".)
In any case, I'll leave the choice of title up to you; my only intent was to get rid of the modern usage of "armed forces", which isn't widely used for ancient militaries (at least in the English-language literature that I'm familiar with). Kirill Lokshin 18:42, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
- Military of the Punic state, perhaps? (Or military of the Punic peoples, if emphasizing the state is a bad idea here?) Or we could go with your original idea of Punic military. Kirill Lokshin 19:56, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
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- I think something like Punic Military Forces might work. It is a really difficult and controversial issue because our sources are limited(most of them are written by their enemies). Wandalstouring 20:35, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] RE: Help with translation
What's the name of the German article you translated it from?--Carabinieri 17:01, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
- I understand what your asking me now. Before, I thought you wanted me to help you translate information from a German article into this English one.
- That is indeed difficult to translate. Another possibility would be "The central question concerning Carthaginian political institutions is their relation to military aspects".--Carabinieri 17:55, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
- I changed it to: "The central problem concerning Carthaginian political institutions is their relation to military aspects" Let's see what others suggest.Wandalstouring 19:08, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Re: Renomination of Pontiac
Fixed it; the old page just needed to be moved to an archive. You can fill in Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Pontiac's Rebellion with anything you want for the new nom now. Kirill Lokshin 01:52, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] British English orthography
You were correct in your assumption that I am ignorant to British orthography. However, it seems that the extreme majority of english speakers who have used the related word, online, seem to prefer "maneuver" over "manouver". I had googled it before correcting to ensure I'm not basing my correction simply on my own perception of the correct spelling. Thanks for letting me know about that little tidbit, though. :) Richard2Me 19:40, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] German/English translations
Hey, I just wanted to get your opinion on something: I was looking through the articles on the various SS divisions, and I was wondering if the various lists of commanders and orders of battle should be translated? For example, should we make alterations like substituting "major" for "sturmbannführer"? I think that these lists need translating, but I wondered if you had an opinion. Carom 20:50, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- OK, given that both you and Kirill feel they should be left "as is," I won't translate the ranks - however, I would like to translate the orders of battle (at least in part - I don't intend to translate things like "panzergrenadier," but per my comment to Kirill, I think some of the less common words might be translated). Carom 22:19, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
- You can see an example of what I have in mind here. I've translated "abteilung" as "detachment," which I think is correct, but I can change it if you have a better suggestion. Also, I believe that "assault gun" is the best translation of "sturmgeschütz," but "Assault gun detachment" seems kind of clunky - is there another (possibly better) translation? Carom 17:11, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
- Also: "regimentstab" = "regimental headquarters"? Or is the more literal "regimental staff" a better choice? Carom 17:14, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
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- Contact Carabinieri, he is a native speaker of both languages. Furthermore http://dict.leo.org/?lang=de&lp=ende may help you. Wandalstouring 17:19, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
- Keep translations low, even more so if you are not sure and give the German word with an English explanation of the meaning in parentheses afterwards. Before giving you some tipps I have to read a bit about the SS structure. Wandalstouring 17:25, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] Re: The new B-class assessment
Hmm? Personally, I don't see any fundamental problems with how the discussion is proceeding at the moment; sure, it will take some time to settle down, but that's true of pretty much any proposal on that scale. :-) Kirill Lokshin 00:08, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Roman-Spartan War
I found out some minor infomation about the Spartan armour of the time. They used a Thracian helmet which had no nose guard and left more room unprotected at the front of the face than the Corinthian helmet. Kyriakos 00:17, 13 January 2007 (UTC)
- Ok, so they were equiped pretty normal, but not light (Macedonian troops often lacked helmets). Can you add this with a reference at well armed phalangites?Wandalstouring 00:20, 13 January 2007 (UTC)