Talk:Wang Ming
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While this article contains a good deal of information, it is faulty in terms of organization, missing information, has poor grammar, and it contains a lot of opinion.
Grammar is the most obvious of the article's defects. Fortunately it is also the easiest to correct.
In terms of organization, the article currently does not follow a chronological timeline. Moreover, the last editor divided the biography sections by geography instead of by important segments in history such as the rise of the ComIntern, the Chinese Civil War, and so on.
The article is also missing explanations to key events. Important events such as the Chinese Civil War and Imperial Japan's Invasion of China are barely mentioned or explained, which will result in confusing readers not familiar with modern Chinese history. I will try to edit this article, but given the severity of flaws; it will be a long time before this article is fixed.
--Cha0sth30ry 06:44, 2 November 2005 (UTC)
The geography is an important sign of important stages of Wang's lives, and the important events of Chinese history can be found in the relevant articles. This is just an article instead of a discourse or treatise.Please keep this in mind.I do agree there are some grammar mistakes for the hurry. But I can't agree with the flaws being severe and the facts being inaccurate.Be more patient and attentive. I welcome your correction of my grammar mistakes.
First I'd like to say that I appreciate the time and effort that you took to put this article out. I did not mean to seem overly critical; I just thought that you had already abandoned the article.
I could be wrong, but couldn't be easier for the reader just to outline the important stages of his life?
I agree that important events could be found in other articles, but I think there still needs to be some explanation of the event and a link to the corresponding article. If there isn't, a lot of context will be lost to the reader. I just want to make the article more friendly to people not familiar with Chinese history.
--Cha0sth30ry 06:44, 2 November 2005 (UTC)
